COMPLETE[GROUP] Women, Children, Love and Marriage by C Gasquoine Hartley - thw

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Post by ashleighjane » December 19th, 2020, 9:51 am

PL notes for Chapter 20:

Around 1:52/53 there is kind of a repeat? it sounds like you corrected something but didn't quite delete all of the part you corrected. Take a listen and you will see what i mean :)

At around 3:43 there is a stumble on 'in the midst of love'

At 4:22 the end of 'Sometimes it is worse than this.' appears to be cut off and merges a little with the next line.

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Post by ashleighjane » December 19th, 2020, 1:08 pm

PL notes for 21:

At 4:21 could you please re-do this line 'Yes, woman has laid upon her the sacred necessity of seriousness in all that is connected with Love.' as you stutter on the word 'seriousness' and then there is a bit of a pause.

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Post by ToddHW » December 19th, 2020, 3:02 pm

SharanRobinson wrote:
December 4th, 2020, 7:27 pm
Here is section 8: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womenchildrenlove_8_hartley_128kb.mp3

Duration: 7:02
This filename has to have "08" instead of just "8" in it - otherwise won't sort properly at Archive.org.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by SharanRobinson » December 19th, 2020, 3:43 pm

ashleighjane wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 9:51 am
PL notes for Chapter 20:

Around 1:52/53 there is kind of a repeat? it sounds like you corrected something but didn't quite delete all of the part you corrected. Take a listen and you will see what i mean :)

At around 3:43 there is a stumble on 'in the midst of love'

At 4:22 the end of 'Sometimes it is worse than this.' appears to be cut off and merges a little with the next line.
Here's the new link for chapter 20:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womenchildrenlove_20_hartley_128kb.mp3
Duration: 5:49
ashleighjane wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 1:08 pm
PL notes for 21:

At 4:21 could you please re-do this line 'Yes, woman has laid upon her the sacred necessity of seriousness in all that is connected with Love.' as you stutter on the word 'seriousness' and then there is a bit of a pause.
New link for chapter 21:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womenchildrenlove_21_hartley_128kb.mp3
Duration: 4:43

ToddHW wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 3:02 pm
SharanRobinson wrote:
December 4th, 2020, 7:27 pm
Here is section 8: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womenchildrenlove_8_hartley_128kb.mp3

Duration: 7:02
This filename has to have "08" instead of just "8" in it - otherwise won't sort properly at Archive.org.

Thanks, Todd
I've already fixed and uploaded it.

Sorry, Ashleigh for making you do double the work.
Thanks.

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Post by ashleighjane » December 19th, 2020, 3:45 pm

Thanks Sharan :D Don't worry, we all make errors sometimes. That's what pling is there for :)

Thanks for mentioning the file name, Todd. I hadn't spotted that!

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Post by ashleighjane » December 20th, 2020, 10:47 am

Hi Sharan, the chapters you fixed are now pl ok.

Here are the pl notes for chapter 22


3:10 There is a bit of a stutter here a 'there would much less sentimentality, but much deeper feeling about marriage.' should be 'there would be much less sentimentality, but much deeper feeling about marriage.

7.27 There is a stutter towards the end of this sentence 'And love between men and women implies duties and responsibilities that go out beyond themselves;' and the end of 'themselves' seems to be cut off.

9.41 'All the evil in marriage? is due to too large families' the word 'is' has been cut out.

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Post by ashleighjane » December 20th, 2020, 3:43 pm

aundrea543 wrote:
December 20th, 2020, 3:01 pm
Chapter 31

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womenchildrenlove_31_hartley_128kb.mp3

Duration 32:48
Thank you :D

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Post by ashleighjane » December 21st, 2020, 8:49 am

chapter 31 pl notes

at 10:48 'This problem of Passionate Friendships, like all problems of sexual conduct, demands something more than emotional treatment; it requires the most careful consideration of many different sets of facts, that often rise up in what seem to be direct opposition.' is repeated. Before it, 'that often rise up in what seem to be direct opposition.' is missing.

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Post by ashleighjane » December 21st, 2020, 3:43 pm

SharanRobinson wrote:
December 21st, 2020, 2:07 pm
Here is chapter 22 redone:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womenchildrenlove_22_hartley_128kb.mp3
Duration: 11:06
Thanks :D This is now PL OK :)

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Post by ashleighjane » December 21st, 2020, 3:48 pm

Just to note:

I have sent abby a private message to let her know that i will orphan her chapters if I haven't heard from her by 5th January. Ordinarily, I would wait until the two months deadline was up but have decided to give a month in this instance seeing as the project is moving fairly quickly and abby does not appear to be active on the forum.

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Post by aundrea543 » December 21st, 2020, 8:22 pm

ashleighjane wrote:
December 21st, 2020, 8:49 am
chapter 31 pl notes

at 10:48 'This problem of Passionate Friendships, like all problems of sexual conduct, demands something more than emotional treatment; it requires the most careful consideration of many different sets of facts, that often rise up in what seem to be direct opposition.' is repeated. Before it, 'that often rise up in what seem to be direct opposition.' is missing.
Oops... I missed clipping that first section out. Thank you :D
I hope you won't have to listen to it all over again :( This was a long one.
If it's helpful... the 10:48 passage you noted now occurs at 10:35 with the repeated section removed.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womenchildrenlove_31_hartley_128kb.mp3
Duration 32:35

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Post by pwitt » December 21st, 2020, 8:24 pm

Hello, I would like to claim sections 3, 4 and 5. Or, and one of those is that is considered to much.

Thanks
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Post by pwitt » December 21st, 2020, 8:26 pm

OOPS! Must be tired...I meant to say "Or any one of those if that is considered to much."

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