Hi Maria,
Here are my PL notes for section 37:
(2:18) p. 342 missing word: "looked
more to the energies"
(2:52) p. 343 missing phrase: "in their hands"
(5:47) I hear "conventions" instead of "convictions"
(7:31) p. 344 extra syllable: "motive
as and zeal"
(8:33) missing word "
most conservative"
(9:50) p. 345 extra word "so fast
that on"
(10:15) missing word "as the one
was"
(10:41) I hear "ideas" instead of "ideals"
(10:50) I hear "superstitious" instead of "superstitions"
(11:39) I hear "patriarch-a-tees" instead of "patriarchates" (last syllable is prounouced kets or kates)
(11:56) I hear "as the Church" instead of "thus the Church"
(14:13) p. 346 part of the word "personal" can't be heard
(15:39) stumble: "general and pa... particular"
(16:46) p. 346/347 missing words: "or appeal
to the Imitatio Christi"
(18:30) I hear "1534-55" instead of "1534-5"
(18:55) I hear "refirms" instead of "confirms"
(19:17) I hear "by the exaggerations" instead of "but..."
(19:40) extra word: "drew
it to it the pity"
(19:58) I hear "a prerogative" instead of "the"
(20:00) extra word: "prerogative
of the Huguenot"
(20:29) stumble" "cultivate
ca charity"
(21:02) p. 348 missing word "Revolution"
(21:23) stumble: "power
of a of the"
(22:41) I hear "among nothing" instead of "almost"
(22:49) extra word and stumble: "
to those
of of the later"
(23:44) big volume jump on "They were", which may hurt the listener's ears. Please de-amplify.
(23:46) I hear "enquiries" instead of "enquirers"
(24:25) p. 349 noise/distortion on "was not built"
(24:50) I hear "it had become" instead of "come"
(25:49) stumble: "the sacred
re literature"
(26:05) big volume jump on "all" - please de-amplify
(26:34) I hear "from the points of view" instead of "two points"
(27:32) line missing: "and had... to Noyon"
(28:20) p. 350 stumble: "the
jo father, who"
(28:25) I hear "belief of a liberal education" instead of "belief in"
(30:23) the word "distinction" is truncated
(31:02) the word "suffer" is truncated
(31:30) p. 350/351 long mid-sentence pause
(31:53) I hear "judge that" instead of "judge the lad"
(34:35) I hear something like "fistfuls" instead of "firstfruits"
(35:17) missing word: "study
him as revealed"
(35:25) stumble: "most learned
ma of men"
(37:08) p. 352 stumble: "whose
har ungainliness"
(39:24) extra word: "is for him
is"
(39:28) extra word: "is
in a clear second"
(39:31) missing word: "jurist
and a scholar"
(39:32) long mid-sentence pause
(40:56) "teach" is truncated
(40:59) "weep" is truncated
(41:19) I hear "endure" instead of "injure" (IN-jure)
There should be 5 seconds of silence at the end.
Please make these edits in the existing recording, rather than reading the whole text again.
I'll wait until this section is done before PLing the next one. If you could check your other sections for similar issues and fix any that you find in the meantime, that would be greatly appreciated.
In terms of CC, I would suggest making sure there's a pause at the end of every sentence and paying additional attention to the pronunciation of the long ee, so it doesn't come out sounding like the short i (e.g., "least" as "list"), which can be confusing.
I'll also comment on prononciation of two words that occur frequently in this chapter. "Apostle" rhymes with "colossal" (the t is silent), and I'm hearing an extra "ghee" syllable in Zwingli (pronounced ЦВИНГ-ли). I won't ask you to fix those here, but you could keep that in mind for other recordings.
Thanks!
Michael