Just one small fix is needed here: please shorten the silence at the start to less than 1 second (currently >2).Murphy8104 wrote: ↑January 16th, 2021, 2:17 pm I have uploaded Section 69 for review.........That's Chapter 18 Part 3.
I'm also occasionally hearing the kind of noise that occurs when a burst of air from one's breath hits the mic directly. It's mostly happening here with "ch" sounds, and less frequently "f" and others. It's not loud or frequent enough to ask for changes, but please watch out for it in the future. We wouldn't want it to distract the listener from your excellent readings. This problem can be addressed by shifting the mic a little bit to the side. I don't recall hearing this type of noise in your earlier recordings, and here it happens mainly during the first few minutes, and then a bit towards the end. Hopefully, it's just a matter of minor adjustment in your setup.
Michael