[COMPLETE] The Elect Lady by George MacDonald - icequeen

UnaSalusVictis · Post by **UnaSalusVictis** » March 1st, 2021, 2:38 pm

I can read section 16 - Andrew and Dawtie
It's on the longer side, but I should be able to do it this week.

HannahMary · Post by **HannahMary** » March 1st, 2021, 7:36 pm

UnaSalusVictis wrote: ↑March 1st, 2021, 2:38 pm I can read section 16 - Andrew and Dawtie
It's on the longer side, but I should be able to do it this week.

Thank you!

benjaminpwhite · Post by **benjaminpwhite** » March 2nd, 2021, 11:49 am

Here is Chapter 20
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_20_macdonald_128kb.mp3 (8:04)

HannahMary · Post by **HannahMary** » March 2nd, 2021, 1:17 pm

benjaminpwhite wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 11:49 am Here is Chapter 20
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_20_macdonald_128kb.mp3 (8:04)

Thanks, Ben.

benjaminpwhite · Post by **benjaminpwhite** » March 2nd, 2021, 2:51 pm

And here is chapter 30
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_30_macdonald_128kb.mp3 (17:14)

HannahMary · Post by **HannahMary** » March 2nd, 2021, 3:23 pm

benjaminpwhite wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 2:51 pm And here is chapter 30
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_30_macdonald_128kb.mp3 (17:14)

JoannaHoyt · Post by **JoannaHoyt** » March 2nd, 2021, 4:49 pm

benjaminpwhite wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 11:49 am Here is Chapter 20
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_20_macdonald_128kb.mp3 (8:04)

Thank you! Most of this is clear and good. Just two small things: Please add "End of Chapter 20" at the end. Also, there's a sort of loud crack or snap at 5:01 just before the sentence begins.

JoannaHoyt · Post by **JoannaHoyt** » March 2nd, 2021, 5:16 pm

benjaminpwhite wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 2:51 pm And here is chapter 30
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_30_macdonald_128kb.mp3 (17:14)

Thank you again! All the text is correct and clear here. There are a few places, though, where the volume jumps and this seems to produce a distracting squeal. I am hearing this in the following places:

1:07-1:10, "empty-handed" through "the eyes"
10:58 "You never touched it"
11:39-11:43 "any suspicion..."
13:18 on "chalice"
13:37-41 sentence starting "You had better answer..."
13:49 lie
14:24 Stop, stop

I think using Amplify on these selected spots should take care of this.
Thank you again.

benjaminpwhite · Post by **benjaminpwhite** » March 2nd, 2021, 7:39 pm

Thanks for proofing!

Here is an updated chapter 30 https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_20_macdonald_128kb.mp3 (17:14)

benjaminpwhite · Post by **benjaminpwhite** » March 2nd, 2021, 7:41 pm

Sorry this is Chapter 30 and the previous post was chapter 20 https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_30_macdonald_128kb.mp3

JoannaHoyt · Post by **JoannaHoyt** » March 3rd, 2021, 4:20 am

benjaminpwhite wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 7:41 pm Sorry this is Chapter 30 and the previous post was chapter 20 https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_30_macdonald_128kb.mp3

Thank you for these very prompt fixes!

Chapters 20 and 30 are PL OK, and delightfully lively too.

benjaminpwhite · Post by **benjaminpwhite** » March 3rd, 2021, 2:52 pm

JoannaHoyt wrote: ↑March 3rd, 2021, 4:20 am
benjaminpwhite wrote: ↑March 2nd, 2021, 7:41 pm Sorry this is Chapter 30 and the previous post was chapter 20 https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_30_macdonald_128kb.mp3
Thank you for these very prompt fixes! Chapters 20 and 30 are PL OK, and delightfully lively too.

Thanks!

UnaSalusVictis · Post by **UnaSalusVictis** » March 3rd, 2021, 11:13 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_16_macdonald_128kb.mp3
Duration ~ 14:47

JoannaHoyt · Post by **JoannaHoyt** » March 4th, 2021, 10:57 am

UnaSalusVictis wrote: ↑March 3rd, 2021, 11:13 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_16_macdonald_128kb.mp3
Duration ~ 14:47

This is beautifully read--I do enjoy your voices.

There's just one minor thing: please add "The Elect Lady, by George MacDonald" at second 14 before you give the chapter number for the second time.

UnaSalusVictis · Post by **UnaSalusVictis** » March 4th, 2021, 11:21 pm

JoannaHoyt wrote: ↑March 4th, 2021, 10:57 am
This is beautifully read--I do enjoy your voices. There's just one minor thing: please add "The Elect Lady, by George MacDonald" at second 14 before you give the chapter number for the second time.

Fixed! https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/electlady_16_macdonald_128kb.mp3

New duration: 14:50