Sorry for the delay in PL'ing this. Life got in the way and I didn't have access to an actual computer.deLorinel wrote: ↑October 3rd, 2020, 8:58 amUploaded chapter 3, ready for listening. Will begin chapter 2.
Chapter 3 is PL OK! The performance in this one was great! So many unique and interesting character voices!
I do have one small and nitpicky comment though: in the beginning intro, you say "Chapter number 3 of Black'erchief Dick". The "number" isn't necessary, and generally readers will just say "Chapter 3 of Black'erchief Dick". This is not something that needs to be fixed for this file, it's just something to keep in mind for future chapters.
I look forward to hearing what you do for chapter 2!