[ANIMALS]The Living Animals of the World, Volume 2: Birds, Reptiles and Amphibians, Fishes, Molluscs, etc. -Leni
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OK - here's your PL OKdavydave wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 11:00 amHey, section 8 now corrected
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_08_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks, Dave

Here is section 42, "Sharks & Rays":
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_42_various_128kb.mp3
Duration 15:52
...LJB
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_42_various_128kb.mp3
Duration 15:52
...LJB

Louise
"every little breeze..."
"every little breeze..."
Thanks much!maxgal wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 3:47 pmHere is section 42, "Sharks & Rays":
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_42_various_128kb.mp3
Duration 15:52
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maxgal wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 3:47 pmHere is section 42, "Sharks & Rays":
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_42_various_128kb.mp3
Duration 15:52
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Section 42 PL Notes:
You really bring a nice articulation to your narration.
I did have a concern, however, about the very long silences you are leaving in between sentences, most of them measuring 2-3 seconds in length. That is excessively long, leads one's attention to wander and I believe, is extremely detrimental to what is otherwise a very fine narration. Can you spend a bit of time to edit these out?
While you're in there, please see 3:22 "some" should be "small"
Here is Section 29
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_29_various_128kb.mp3
length is 14:01
-Jerry
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_29_various_128kb.mp3
length is 14:01
-Jerry
RitaBoutros wrote: ↑August 1st, 2020, 6:12 ammaxgal wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 3:47 pmHere is section 42, "Sharks & Rays":
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_42_various_128kb.mp3
Duration 15:52
...LJB![]()
Section 42 PL Notes:
You really bring a nice articulation to your narration.
I did have a concern, however, about the very long silences you are leaving in between sentences, most of them measuring 2-3 seconds in length. That is excessively long, leads one's attention to wander and I believe, is extremely detrimental to what is otherwise a very fine narration. Can you spend a bit of time to edit these out?
While you're in there, please see 3:22 "some" should be "small"
No problem, I'll fix it.
Might take a couple of days, but it's coming.

...LJB
Louise
"every little breeze..."
"every little breeze..."
*&!$#!!
And triple *&!$#!! *&!$#!! *&!$#!!
Some stupid stuff has come up at home, so I have to relinquish my 3 other claims!
So please take back sections 10, 20, & 43 -- BOPs&owls, torts&turts, and crabs&scorps.
Sorry...LJB
And triple *&!$#!! *&!$#!! *&!$#!!
Some stupid stuff has come up at home, so I have to relinquish my 3 other claims!
So please take back sections 10, 20, & 43 -- BOPs&owls, torts&turts, and crabs&scorps.
Sorry...LJB

Louise
"every little breeze..."
"every little breeze..."
Thanks much!jr6524 wrote: ↑August 1st, 2020, 8:44 amHere is Section 29
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_29_various_128kb.mp3
length is 14:01
-Jerry
Sorry to hear that. Sections unassigned.
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Really nice recording, Jerry! PL OKjr6524 wrote: ↑August 1st, 2020, 8:44 amHere is Section 29
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_29_various_128kb.mp3
length is 14:01
-Jerry
I know my claims list is already pretty long, but could I add 10 and 20?
I'm reading two from my list this evening, so it's kind of an exchange...
I'm reading two from my list this evening, so it's kind of an exchange...

Sure! Thanks!
Sure, thanks for claiming!