ColleenMc wrote: ↑September 16th, 2020, 5:46 pmHere is section 1:
I am writing with my PL notes for Section 1! But first off, well done with your reading! It definitely was dynamic, and interesting for me to listen to!
So here are my PL notes:
8:56 – I hear (if I’m not mistaken) something like “thought” (past tense of “to think”) – it should be “though”. Please would you mind checking this (and let me know if I am wrong)? (In the text, it’s halfway through page 156.)
30:13 – I hear a minor stumble (or repetition) here: “and for… and for cases of incipient phthisis”. (In the text, this is at the top of page 167.)
One more thing that I thought I’d ask you about: I assume numbers between brackets (parentheses) don’t need to be read, do they? I am referring, for example, to that “(2)” beginning the third paragraph on page 156 (this instance, specifically, would occur at 8:22, if that was to be read of course!). In any case, please feel free to ignore this if, in your experience, the recording is just OK in this respect!
I hope that helps!