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Post by RitaBoutros » November 19th, 2020, 7:06 am

Delmar H Dolbier wrote:
November 16th, 2020, 10:21 pm
SECTION 16:

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_16_putnam_128kb.mp3
31 mi 51 sec
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Thanks for your recording Delmar - it was very lively and animated! Just 2 tiny notes:

:30 insert the date "1473"
26:51 "and Peter de Hagenbach" should be "and Peter von Hagenbach"

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Post by Delmar H Dolbier » November 19th, 2020, 9:27 pm

Corrected Chapter 16:


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_16_putnam_128kb.mp3
31 min 51 sec
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Post by Lynnet » November 20th, 2020, 7:27 am

Delmar H Dolbier wrote:
November 19th, 2020, 9:27 pm
Corrected Chapter 16:


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_16_putnam_128kb.mp3
31 min 51 sec
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Post by RitaBoutros » November 21st, 2020, 5:13 am

Delmar H Dolbier wrote:
November 19th, 2020, 9:27 pm
Corrected Chapter 16:


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_16_putnam_128kb.mp3
31 min 51 sec
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Sec 16 is PL OK

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Post by hmansoor » November 28th, 2020, 4:17 pm

Hi.

Chapter 15 completed. (my first recording ever)

34:32 length

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_15_putnam_128kb.mp3

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Post by Lynnet » November 28th, 2020, 4:39 pm

hmansoor wrote:
November 28th, 2020, 4:17 pm
Hi.

Chapter 15 completed. (my first recording ever)

34:32 length

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_15_putnam_128kb.mp3

Husain
Congratulations on your first recording!
Rita will listen as soon as she can.
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Post by RitaBoutros » November 29th, 2020, 6:38 am

hmansoor wrote:
November 28th, 2020, 4:17 pm
Hi.

Chapter 15 completed. (my first recording ever)

34:32 length

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_15_putnam_128kb.mp3

Husain
Thank you for your recording, Husain. Your reading was very articulate and the pacing perfect. Just a couple of notes on this chapter below, items which are easily fixable. If you need help with editing, let me know, although it is really a "cut and paste" operation to insert or replace words.

I might also mention, only because there is often a bewildering cast of characters to keep track of, I personally would have opted to read what the editor inserted in his brackets. These are often quite elucidating and help to dispel confusion. However, I leave that to your discretion as to whether you want to keep it as is.

:22 there is a repeat of "Charles the Bold, chapter 15"
2:57 "second in regard to M. d'Urse" I think you said Madame and it occurs to me it should be Monsieur. Can you check this? I could be wrong here
19:35 "and never will do otherwise" please delete "otherwise"
19:39 "I am advised now" should be "I am advised how"
21:32 "for nothing was about it" should be "for nothing was done about it"
30:41 You did not say "and it was the year 1472" as this is in regular parentheses and not in editor's brackets. I believe it is part of the text
31:51 "to whatever king" should be "to whatever kind"

Please make sure we have a full 5 seconds of silence at the end. I think there are only about 3.

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Post by hmansoor » November 29th, 2020, 11:50 am

Hi.

Corrected file for Chapter 15.

34:34

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_15_putnam_128kb.mp3

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Post by Lynnet » November 29th, 2020, 12:06 pm

hmansoor wrote:
November 29th, 2020, 11:50 am
Hi.

Corrected file for Chapter 15.

34:34

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_15_putnam_128kb.mp3

Husain
Thank you
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Post by RitaBoutros » November 29th, 2020, 2:12 pm

hmansoor wrote:
November 29th, 2020, 11:50 am
Hi.

Corrected file for Chapter 15.

34:34

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/charlesthebold_15_putnam_128kb.mp3

Husain
Sec 15 is PL OK

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