[beer] The Theory and Practice of Brewing by M. Combrune - availle

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Post by Lmnei » September 19th, 2019, 8:13 pm

mhnewell wrote:
September 15th, 2019, 10:41 am
Hello Lynda! Thanks for the feedback.

- I re-exported as mono. Not sure how that setting reverted but will keep an eye out for that in the future.
- 5 seconds at the end.
- I've installed the checker and will use that as my last pass before future uploads.
- Cleaned the noise per your instructions in Audacity.

New link: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_35_combrune_128kb_take2.mp3 Length is now 14:41.

Thanks again.

Matthew
I think I forgot to post that this is PL OK :) :clap: Well done on the corrections!

Lynda

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Post by Lmnei » September 19th, 2019, 8:21 pm

mhnewell wrote:
September 19th, 2019, 6:33 pm
Lmnei wrote:
September 19th, 2019, 5:35 pm

00:00 - So, the first piece of feedback is remember what I told you about starting the recording? You need to leave between .5 and 1 second of silence at the beginning please. :thumbs:
03:53 – you abbreviated the sentence. Please record the actual sentence of “for, in some part or other of the process”
11:38 – that should be 54 times 2 = 108 36 times 2 = 72 etc,
11:56 – should say equals 54 barrels, not just “54 barrels. Note: You did the 2nd part of the list correctly 😊
13:45 – the numbers 6,32 means six point three two. That is the European way of annotating decimals. Please correct the list as they are not hundreds. You will end up with 24 barrels.
24:01 – you said two thirds, needs to be two fifths please.
24:35 – add “equals”

Accomplished! Thanks for the great feedback, Lynda. All of the notes have been reviewed and corrected.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_25_combrune_128kb.mp3
Length is 28:25

Matthew
AND that is a wrap! AWESOME editing Matthew! This is now PL OK! Ava, I put the file link in and removed comment.

Lynda

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Post by NinaC777 » October 13th, 2019, 2:42 am

Hi Lynda
So sorry for the delay! I broke my femur and dislocated my knee so have been in and out of hospital. Now waiting for corrective surgery (in January). I’m currently struggling to get around but will try and address your issues next week.

Again, my sincere apologies.

Blessings
Christina

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Post by Ariphron » November 2nd, 2019, 3:50 am

Section 18 (27:58)
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_18_combrune_128kb.mp3

I kind of wish he'd had the concept of oxidation, and the use of "salts" to refer to what in most cases are sugars does take some getting used to. Also, the use of some algebra could have simplified the calculations, but I did what I could to read the tables intelligibly.

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Post by Availle » November 2nd, 2019, 5:05 am

Thank you!

Yes, sometimes the rule "we read as it was written" can be rather... :?
I'm glad you saw it through though! :thumbs:
Cheers,
Ava.

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Post by Lmnei » November 4th, 2019, 9:43 am

Ariphron wrote:
November 2nd, 2019, 3:50 am
Section 18 (27:58)
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_18_combrune_128kb.mp3

I kind of wish he'd had the concept of oxidation, and the use of "salts" to refer to what in most cases are sugars does take some getting used to. Also, the use of some algebra could have simplified the calculations, but I did what I could to read the tables intelligibly.
Hi there! Here is your PL feedback on your reading of Chapter 18 Part 1.

02:34 – please remove “Section 12 of Malting” it was not in the text, leaving “see page 124”
3:31, 4:53, 5:30, 6:27, 7:06, 7:58, 8:43, 12:46, 14:56, 15:40, 15:57, 16:22, 20:00, 27:07 – please remove your long breath sounds
4:12 – please remove “generally 19 degrees less” comment not in text
9:38 – please remove the footnote – they were to be ignored per the note below the MW
12:53 – you inserted “leaves” in the table – no need to change however in future please just read the table as written. Such as "129 degrees, 8 parts."
15:08 – please remove the footnote – they were to be ignored per the note below the MW

Lynda

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