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mhnewell wrote: September 15th, 2019, 10:41 am Hello Lynda! Thanks for the feedback.

- I re-exported as mono. Not sure how that setting reverted but will keep an eye out for that in the future.
- 5 seconds at the end.
- I've installed the checker and will use that as my last pass before future uploads.
- Cleaned the noise per your instructions in Audacity.

New link: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_35_combrune_128kb_take2.mp3 Length is now 14:41.

Thanks again.

Matthew
I think I forgot to post that this is PL OK :) :clap: Well done on the corrections!

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mhnewell wrote: September 19th, 2019, 6:33 pm
Lmnei wrote: September 19th, 2019, 5:35 pm
00:00 - So, the first piece of feedback is remember what I told you about starting the recording? You need to leave between .5 and 1 second of silence at the beginning please. :thumbs:
03:53 – you abbreviated the sentence. Please record the actual sentence of “for, in some part or other of the process”
11:38 – that should be 54 times 2 = 108 36 times 2 = 72 etc,
11:56 – should say equals 54 barrels, not just “54 barrels. Note: You did the 2nd part of the list correctly 😊
13:45 – the numbers 6,32 means six point three two. That is the European way of annotating decimals. Please correct the list as they are not hundreds. You will end up with 24 barrels.
24:01 – you said two thirds, needs to be two fifths please.
24:35 – add “equals”

Accomplished! Thanks for the great feedback, Lynda. All of the notes have been reviewed and corrected.

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_25_combrune_128kb.mp3
Length is 28:25

Matthew
AND that is a wrap! AWESOME editing Matthew! This is now PL OK! Ava, I put the file link in and removed comment.

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Post by NinaC777 »

Hi Lynda
So sorry for the delay! I broke my femur and dislocated my knee so have been in and out of hospital. Now waiting for corrective surgery (in January). I’m currently struggling to get around but will try and address your issues next week.

Again, my sincere apologies.

Blessings
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Post by Ariphron »

Section 18 (27:58)
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_18_combrune_128kb.mp3

I kind of wish he'd had the concept of oxidation, and the use of "salts" to refer to what in most cases are sugars does take some getting used to. Also, the use of some algebra could have simplified the calculations, but I did what I could to read the tables intelligibly.
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Thank you!

Yes, sometimes the rule "we read as it was written" can be rather... :?
I'm glad you saw it through though! :thumbs:
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Ariphron wrote: November 2nd, 2019, 3:50 am Section 18 (27:58)
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/brewing_18_combrune_128kb.mp3

I kind of wish he'd had the concept of oxidation, and the use of "salts" to refer to what in most cases are sugars does take some getting used to. Also, the use of some algebra could have simplified the calculations, but I did what I could to read the tables intelligibly.
Hi there! Here is your PL feedback on your reading of Chapter 18 Part 1.

02:34 – please remove “Section 12 of Malting” it was not in the text, leaving “see page 124”
3:31, 4:53, 5:30, 6:27, 7:06, 7:58, 8:43, 12:46, 14:56, 15:40, 15:57, 16:22, 20:00, 27:07 – please remove your long breath sounds
4:12 – please remove “generally 19 degrees less” comment not in text
9:38 – please remove the footnote – they were to be ignored per the note below the MW
12:53 – you inserted “leaves” in the table – no need to change however in future please just read the table as written. Such as "129 degrees, 8 parts."
15:08 – please remove the footnote – they were to be ignored per the note below the MW

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Post by MadddySuram »

Hi, Caroline.

I'd like to claim sections 26 and 27 please. Thanks!
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All yours, thank you so much! :D
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I have claimed and uploaded section 23.

In the next few days, I'll contact the readers of the outstanding sections and see what's going on / orphan what is needed. I hope we can get this done asap in the new year.
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Thanks Ava!

I will give it a listen!

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Availle wrote: December 31st, 2019, 7:29 am I have claimed and uploaded section 23.

In the next few days, I'll contact the readers of the outstanding sections and see what's going on / orphan what is needed. I hope we can get this done asap in the new year.
Hi Ava - I have listened to Section 23 and the text is PL OK however you did not record the table like other people have. Are you planning on recording the table?

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No, I'm not going to. That's essentially three tables wrapped into one; if it were more simple like the others, I'd do it, but not this one.

Thanks for PLing! :D
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Availle wrote: December 31st, 2019, 5:39 pm No, I'm not going to. That's essentially three tables wrapped into one; if it were more simple like the others, I'd do it, but not this one.

Thanks for PLing! :D
Okay - marked as PL OK then.

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I have contacted the two readers with PL notes/outstanding sections and hope for a swift reply.

Also, 3 sections orphaned - any takers? :D
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Section 20 orphaned on reader's request.
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