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Post by fiddlesticks » October 7th, 2018, 7:21 pm

Thanks, you sure are on a roll!
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Post by karlkuzmich » October 8th, 2018, 6:40 am

sec 15 PL OK
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Post by rosamundekingsley98 » October 8th, 2018, 11:51 am

Chapter 7 - Dawn of the Morning


https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/dawnofthemorning_07_hill_128kb.mp3

17:54:480s

Thank you! First time and appreciate any feedback.

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Post by fiddlesticks » October 8th, 2018, 11:58 am

Thank you!
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Dawn of Morning
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God Delights in me (blog)
"I'm not addicted to books, we're in a committed relationship!"

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Post by karlkuzmich » October 10th, 2018, 8:01 pm

rosamundekingsley98 wrote:
October 8th, 2018, 11:51 am
Chapter 7 - Dawn of the Morning ... First time and appreciate any feedback.
Sec.7: Congratulations, Rosamunde, on your début! Good job! :thumbs: A few notes:
10:50 stumble on "concerning"
12:25 Rensselaer is pronounced /rɛnsəˈlɪər/
17:45 "End of Dawn of the Morning, by Grace Livingston Hill. " -- this will be said at the end of the book, does not belong here, please erase.
You are asking for feedback, well, here is an advice, NOT criticism. You tend to start sentences loud and finish quiet, that's just fine, pleasant and expressive, but the sound volume changes all the time.
If you wish to somewhat level the volume, you could try Dynamic Range Compression https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Dynamic_Range_Compression
Looking forward to your future recordings!
Mark Chulsky / Марк Чульский

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Post by karlkuzmich » October 10th, 2018, 8:05 pm

Sec.23,24 PL OK
Mark Chulsky / Марк Чульский

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Post by fiddlesticks » October 10th, 2018, 9:59 pm

Thank you Mark!
~Tiffany
Dawn of Morning
The Wyvern Mystery
God Delights in me (blog)
"I'm not addicted to books, we're in a committed relationship!"

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Post by rosamundekingsley98 » October 13th, 2018, 4:54 pm

karlkuzmich wrote:
October 10th, 2018, 8:01 pm
rosamundekingsley98 wrote:
October 8th, 2018, 11:51 am
Chapter 7 - Dawn of the Morning ... First time and appreciate any feedback.
Sec.7: Congratulations, Rosamunde, on your début! Good job! :thumbs: A few notes:
10:50 stumble on "concerning"
12:25 Rensselaer is pronounced /rɛnsəˈlɪər/
17:45 "End of Dawn of the Morning, by Grace Livingston Hill. " -- this will be said at the end of the book, does not belong here, please erase.
You are asking for feedback, well, here is an advice, NOT criticism. You tend to start sentences loud and finish quiet, that's just fine, pleasant and expressive, but the sound volume changes all the time.
If you wish to somewhat level the volume, you could try Dynamic Range Compression https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Dynamic_Range_Compression
Looking forward to your future recordings!
Dear Mark - thanks for your advice. I will upload the updated chapter 7 shortly. With chapter 8, I tried to modulate my voice a little to provide more consistent sound volume. And constructive criticism is always appreciated - no worries. My day job - I am criticized all the time.

Thanks!

Rosamunde

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Post by rosamundekingsley98 » October 13th, 2018, 7:38 pm

Chapter 8


https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/dawnofthemorning_08_hill_128kb.mp3

Time: 18:59

As always, any feedback appreciated! Thank you.

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Post by rosamundekingsley98 » October 13th, 2018, 8:07 pm

I will volunteer for Chapter XVII. Thanks. Rosamunde

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Post by fiddlesticks » October 13th, 2018, 8:35 pm

Thank you Rosamunde! I will update the MW and assign chapter 17 to you!
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God Delights in me (blog)
"I'm not addicted to books, we're in a committed relationship!"

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Post by karlkuzmich » October 15th, 2018, 6:09 pm

Sec. 7,8 PL OK :thumbs:
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Post by rosamundekingsley98 » October 15th, 2018, 6:54 pm

karlkuzmich wrote:
October 15th, 2018, 6:09 pm
Sec. 7,8 PL OK :thumbs:
Thank you!

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