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Thanks, you sure are on a roll!
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sec 15 PL OK
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Chapter 7 - Dawn of the Morning


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Thank you! First time and appreciate any feedback.
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Thank you!
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rosamundekingsley98 wrote: October 8th, 2018, 11:51 am Chapter 7 - Dawn of the Morning ... First time and appreciate any feedback.
Sec.7: Congratulations, Rosamunde, on your début! Good job! :thumbs: A few notes:
10:50 stumble on "concerning"
12:25 Rensselaer is pronounced /rɛnsəˈlɪər/
17:45 "End of Dawn of the Morning, by Grace Livingston Hill. " -- this will be said at the end of the book, does not belong here, please erase.
You are asking for feedback, well, here is an advice, NOT criticism. You tend to start sentences loud and finish quiet, that's just fine, pleasant and expressive, but the sound volume changes all the time.
If you wish to somewhat level the volume, you could try Dynamic Range Compression https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Dynamic_Range_Compression
Looking forward to your future recordings!
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Sec.23,24 PL OK
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Thank you Mark!
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karlkuzmich wrote: October 10th, 2018, 8:01 pm
rosamundekingsley98 wrote: October 8th, 2018, 11:51 am Chapter 7 - Dawn of the Morning ... First time and appreciate any feedback.
Sec.7: Congratulations, Rosamunde, on your début! Good job! :thumbs: A few notes:
10:50 stumble on "concerning"
12:25 Rensselaer is pronounced /rɛnsəˈlɪər/
17:45 "End of Dawn of the Morning, by Grace Livingston Hill. " -- this will be said at the end of the book, does not belong here, please erase.
You are asking for feedback, well, here is an advice, NOT criticism. You tend to start sentences loud and finish quiet, that's just fine, pleasant and expressive, but the sound volume changes all the time.
If you wish to somewhat level the volume, you could try Dynamic Range Compression https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Dynamic_Range_Compression
Looking forward to your future recordings!
Dear Mark - thanks for your advice. I will upload the updated chapter 7 shortly. With chapter 8, I tried to modulate my voice a little to provide more consistent sound volume. And constructive criticism is always appreciated - no worries. My day job - I am criticized all the time.

Thanks!

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Chapter 8


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Time: 18:59

As always, any feedback appreciated! Thank you.

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I will volunteer for Chapter XVII. Thanks. Rosamunde
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Thank you Rosamunde! I will update the MW and assign chapter 17 to you!
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Sec. 7,8 PL OK :thumbs:
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karlkuzmich wrote: October 15th, 2018, 6:09 pm Sec. 7,8 PL OK :thumbs:
Thank you!
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