silverquill wrote: ↑September 16th, 2018, 10:01 pmThank you for reading this chapter for us!Shalott wrote: ↑September 13th, 2018, 6:35 pmHello!
Here's section 2
There a some missed words throughout, but sill within the parameters of standard proof listening. There are, however, several places where there are mouse clicks that are distracting and would be easy to clip out at the following locations:
0:52, 2:00, 2:51, 6:00, 6:10
Then there are several names that are mispronounced. Normally, with standard PL, we don't deal with pronunciation issues, but these are such well-known names, I thought they would be worth mentioning, but I'll let you decide if you would like to correct them. They are as follows:
8:33 - Thames pronounced “Tems.” I hear “Tames”
8:50 and 13:03 West-min-ster. I hear an extra syllable West-min-i-ster
9:04 Greenwich pronounced Grenich, I hear Green-wich
13:01, 13:06, I hear “Wads-worth” instead of “Words-worth”
Finally, the ending silence should be closer to 5 and I see 6 (not a huge deal, but might as well trim it).
Upload your new file (let me know what you have changed) with the same name and post the link and time again.
Let me know if you have any questions about this.
Below I have the edited recording. I took out the clicks and trimmed the ending silence. I also changed the mispronunciations. If you noticed anymore please let me know. This has changed the length of the recording to now 16:04. If there are any more edits that I should make let me know!