All is PL OK, except for incorrect Intro and Outro citations. We do not cite the Section number.
Intro should read "Part 3, Chapter 7 of A Key to Uncle Tom's Cabin, by Harriet Beecher Stowe, . . . . etc. . . . Chapter 7, Emily Russell."
Outro should read "end of Part 3, Chapter 7, Emily Russell."
As to spacing and clarity, all very much improved. The dramatic delivery was perfectly appropriate for this tragic story (in my opinion), and I didn't notice any cut-ins too jarring. It was a really nice performance. Harriet would be proud.
As to your recording/editing process, I can't remember what I've shared with you so I don't want to bore you with repetition, but here's a nutshell view. One day I'll compile this with my other tips into a whole process so I can copy and paste it to other people who ask for my help.
Day 1. Lay down track, without stopping or clicking, repeating phrases if I screw something up, until I think it's right, then go on, hopefully all in one sitting. Save. Noise reduction, compression, equalization to the whole file. Save.
Day 2. Headphones on, I go back and remove extraneous material (using keystrokes for that). Almost always, there is enough good material there to make up a whole file, which cuts down a lot on the need to re-record. But it happens, in which case the voice often doesn't match, and there is a process for making it match.
Day 3. I wait a day or two ('til I can hear myself afresh), then with headphones on, proof-listen along with the text. I also add or shorten spacing, adjust tempo, tweak in other ways. I think I sent you a link to some Youtube videos of mine, and there are a bunch more in our Wiki Video Tutorials.
Day 4. Listen away from my computer, using earbuds, usually on my phone, to see how it sounds to a more casual listener. When I'm satisfied, I turn it in and hope and pray a Proof Listener comes along who will help me make it even better. Like you, for example.
So again, congrats. You're on your way to the stars.
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