OPEN[GRP]Pinero, Playwright by Hamilton Fyfe - thw

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Post by ToddHW » April 21st, 2019, 1:33 pm

Thank you.

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Post by mightyfelix » April 28th, 2019, 10:57 am

Thanks, Elsie. Finally found some time to PL your section. Sorry for the delay. There are a few things that need to be addressed:

1:47 Missing sentence: "The second act certainly does not disappoint us."
9:31 Missing sentence: "Interesting as The Benefit of the Doubt is, it must be seen upon the stage to be fully appreciated." Also in the same place there is a bad take of "Yet it has never been acted in London except..." that you forgot to remove. I suspect you cut out the good sentence instead of the bad one. :wink:
16:48 False start and long pause need to be cut: "But the scene in which Agnes hurls the Bible into the stove..."
17:08-17:17 Two false starts of "If Agnes had ever been convinced..."
18:17 Cut false start: "When she cries out that she had trusted..."
21:04 False start: "Her love for Lucas persuades her to throw them over..."
23:20-23:40 There are two takes of "I suspected this... Oh, proved it" through "more temperate, more impassive." I'd cut the first one, personally. I think the second was better.

You may already know this trick, but an easy way to handle these is to start at the end and work your way up from the bottom of the list. That way, the time stamps don't change and each problem spot will be easier for you to find.

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Post by elsieselwyn » April 28th, 2019, 7:17 pm

Here is section 9 fixed:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/pineroplaywright_09_fyfe_128kb.mp3

Length: 27:00

Just to help you spot PL :D:

9:31 has moved to 9:34

16:48 -> 16:51

17:08 -> 17:03

18:17 -> 18:03

21:04 -> 20:44

23:20 -> 22:52
Please be patient with me while I am on vacation (7/18-7/22) with limited access to Internet.

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Post by mightyfelix » May 3rd, 2019, 12:07 pm

Thanks for the new times, Elsie. Makes my job easier. :9: PL ok now!

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Post by lubee930 » June 2nd, 2019, 7:16 am

Hi Todd--May I please claim Section 6 - "Satire"--? Thanks!
Kind regards,
Lucretia

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Post by ToddHW » June 5th, 2019, 6:06 pm

Thank you.

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Post by lubee930 » June 23rd, 2019, 8:43 pm

Kind regards,
Lucretia

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Post by ToddHW » June 24th, 2019, 3:20 am

Thank you.

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Post by mightyfelix » July 6th, 2019, 11:23 am

lubee930 wrote:
June 23rd, 2019, 8:43 pm
Hi--Here is my Section 06 - Satire:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/pineroplaywright_06_fyfe_128kb.mp3
44:40
Nice work, Lucretia! Very well done, and PL ok. :thumbs:

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Post by ToddHW » July 6th, 2019, 4:14 pm

Thank you.

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