[COMPLETE] The Old Adam by Arnold Bennett - annise

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eggs4ears wrote:Here comes Chapter 1

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/oldadam_01_bennett.mp3 - 55:49
When I try to get this chapter it gives me a "404 Not Found".

Can you re-upload?

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Chapter 3 is PL ok

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Hi Melissa,

The problem is that my filename did not match the filename in the MW. I have trying to upload again with the correct name, but Australia seems to be temporarily disconnected from the Internet tonight (or perhaps it's just my house). As a work round could you PL from the link below? I'll correct the filename later, once I have your corrections or PL OK.

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/theoldadam_01_bennet.mp3

Phil
mbudinski42 wrote:
eggs4ears wrote:Here comes Chapter 1

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/oldadam_01_bennett.mp3 - 55:49
When I try to get this chapter it gives me a "404 Not Found".

Can you re-upload?

Melissa
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Thanks Phil. I'll get on this as soon as I can.
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Chapter 1 Dog-Bite PL Notes:
0:19 missing the final line of the intro: Say: "The Old Adam, by Arnold Bennett. [Chapter]" as well as the roman numeral I from the chapter title.
13:57 said "sixty (or sixteen) thousand", when it should be only "six thousand"
31:40 missing roman numeral IV - I only point this out (as well as roman numeral I) because you say II, III, and V
33:23 repeat "...to give up her barbaric, her barbaric..."
Otherwise, you are good to go (except the file name, of course, which you said you'd fix when you got my notes)

Melissa
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Thanks, Melissa! All corrected and reuploaded with the correct filename:

https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/oldadam_01_bennett.mp3

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mbudinski42 wrote:Chapter 1 Dog-Bite PL Notes:
0:19 missing the final line of the intro: Say: "The Old Adam, by Arnold Bennett. [Chapter]" as well as the roman numeral I from the chapter title.
13:57 said "sixty (or sixteen) thousand", when it should be only "six thousand"
31:40 missing roman numeral IV - I only point this out (as well as roman numeral I) because you say II, III, and V
33:23 repeat "...to give up her barbaric, her barbaric..."
Otherwise, you are good to go (except the file name, of course, which you said you'd fix when you got my notes)

Melissa
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Chapter 1 - Dog-Bite is now PL OK.

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Post by lezer »

eggs4ears wrote: 10 short chapters. If you'd like to grab one or PL, please post here. Either choose a chapter number from 1-10, or I can allocate for you.

Phil Benson
Here's chapter 8:
08
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/oldadam_08_bennett_128kb.mp3
01:05:58

These chapters are not so short... But it's nice to participate in a tribute to Andy.
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Please may I claim Chapter 2?

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Post by acousticwave »

I didn't realise that the chapters were quite so long.
I am afraid I will not be able to undertake the recording of Chapter 2.
Many apologies.

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Thanks, Anna! Yes, I am about to remove 'short' from my initial post! The reason I wrote that is that I initially thought that the chapters were the sections within the chapters (should have checked more carefully!) and I only found out my mistake when I read my own chapter. The sections are short but the chapters turn out to be quite long.
lezer wrote:
eggs4ears wrote: 10 short chapters. If you'd like to grab one or PL, please post here. Either choose a chapter number from 1-10, or I can allocate for you.

Phil Benson
Here's chapter 8:
08
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/oldadam_08_bennett_128kb.mp3
01:05:58

These chapters are not so short... But it's nice to participate in a tribute to Andy.
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Post by lezer »

:) I thought something like that. May be good to put in a word count for the chapters. By the way, can you put my recording into the MW? That will make my to-do list on the catalog page more tidy :) Thanks!
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Hi Anna,
Chapter 8 is very well done and I only have one PL note for you
0:11 the end of your intro (from 'recording by' to the end) is very glitchy. I don't know how else to describe it but when you hear it, you'll know what I mean.

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Claim Chapter 10 please. Section 10/Chapter 10 has Roman Numerals I-VIII. I continue to read through them and just say number I etc and read on?
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