[COMPLETE] Mrs. Dymond by Thackeray Ritchi - ke
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I have put the link in the MW and will listen very soon. Thanks, Jim
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roohi , I enjoyed listening to your reading--very well done. There are, however, a few places that you need to fix.
There were some noises at around 7:00 and 16:00, the first sounded like a plane overhead and the latter paper being crinkled, which are not major interruptions, so I mention them only to remind to do the noise reduction and if you did do that maybe trying to focus on these more striking areas also.
At 11:00, you start the name Dymond with an R and then correct yourself.
At about 12:09, there is a throat clearing.
There are repeats at 13:01, 15:18, and 16:20.
At 18:08, the word to is omitted. Usually the standard review does not worry too much about an occasional omission if it does not affect the sense, but in this case, I expected the to to come next and it didn't so it interfered a bit.
I hope my time indications above are close enough for you to find these issues. Once these are edited, please re-upload, and I will give you the PL OK
Yours, Jim
There were some noises at around 7:00 and 16:00, the first sounded like a plane overhead and the latter paper being crinkled, which are not major interruptions, so I mention them only to remind to do the noise reduction and if you did do that maybe trying to focus on these more striking areas also.
At 11:00, you start the name Dymond with an R and then correct yourself.
At about 12:09, there is a throat clearing.
There are repeats at 13:01, 15:18, and 16:20.
At 18:08, the word to is omitted. Usually the standard review does not worry too much about an occasional omission if it does not affect the sense, but in this case, I expected the to to come next and it didn't so it interfered a bit.
I hope my time indications above are close enough for you to find these issues. Once these are edited, please re-upload, and I will give you the PL OK
Yours, Jim
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/mrsdymond_16_ritchie_128kb.mp3
ive done the needful. Hopefully it should be ok.
regards
roohi
ive done the needful. Hopefully it should be ok.
regards
roohi
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/mrsdymond_17_ritchie_128kbs.mp3
section 17
13.065
Regards
roohi
section 17
13.065
Regards
roohi
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Thank you, roohi. I have put 17 in the MW and will PL this evening. Jim
I am so sorry, I am going to have to drop out of this project.
I am assigned Chapter 10.
I am deeply involved in the second volume of a (solo) trilogy, and do not want to hold up your project.
My apologies!
Judi
I am assigned Chapter 10.
I am deeply involved in the second volume of a (solo) trilogy, and do not want to hold up your project.
My apologies!
Judi
Judi Mason