Complete Tommy and Grizel by J. M. Barrie - lt

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linny
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Post by linny » December 29th, 2016, 4:17 pm

Shiela,
I really enjoyed your reading. This sounds like it's going to be a fun book.

PL notes for chapter 3
2:39 repeat and long pause - "Sandys on Woman,"

Since you will be editing the file, there is a noise at 10:07.18 which looks to be easily deleted.

13:00 repeat/stumble "and" he was her attendant for the afternoon

There is a very slight recurring sound in your recording; primarily in the first half. I don't find it troublesome and may simply be that you are moving a bit while recording. I mention it in case you are unaware. No change necessary for this recording. A sample of the sound may be found at 9:01.46

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Post by sheilablunt » December 30th, 2016, 7:15 pm

Linny,
The fixes were easy (I hope). thanks for the kind words; the new time is 25:14
Sheila

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_03_barrie_128.mp3

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Post by linny » December 30th, 2016, 7:25 pm

Hello Sheila,
Great edits. That noise I mentioned moved to 10:02 after the first edit was added so I went ahead and removed it for you. Sometimes when there are multiple edits to make it's easier to correct moving from the end to the beginning of the recording so the time stamps mentioned don't get lost. https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_03_barrie_128.mp3

Spot check PL OK! :thumbs:

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Post by miss stav » December 31st, 2016, 8:21 am

Thank you both. Shiela, chapter 4 is all yours. Have fun.
Looking for an easy read? Try Mollie's Pirnce and Nature And Art. Want to read a civil war novel? Try Order Number 11. Like feminist fiction? Try The Hevenly Twins.

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Post by sheilablunt » January 2nd, 2017, 2:13 pm

Hi Linny,
Here is chapter 4. I show the time at 25:16. I always do my edits from end toward beginning but I don't always pause to write the place on the track ; I am doing that now there is less chance of missing an edit that way. Thanks
Sheila
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_04_barrie_128kb.mp3

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Post by miss stav » January 2nd, 2017, 3:19 pm

Thank you very very much, Shiela. Would you like to continue with chapter 5?
Looking for an easy read? Try Mollie's Pirnce and Nature And Art. Want to read a civil war novel? Try Order Number 11. Like feminist fiction? Try The Hevenly Twins.

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Post by linny » January 2nd, 2017, 3:48 pm

Hello Sheila,
Chapter 4 is PL OK! Great book 1 summary chapter. Should be very interesting from here.

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Post by sheilablunt » January 6th, 2017, 8:46 pm

Yes, I'll be happy to read chapter 5.
Sheila

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Post by sheilablunt » January 6th, 2017, 8:46 pm

Yes, I'll be happy to read chapter 5.
Sheila

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Post by miss stav » January 6th, 2017, 11:38 pm

Thank you
Looking for an easy read? Try Mollie's Pirnce and Nature And Art. Want to read a civil war novel? Try Order Number 11. Like feminist fiction? Try The Hevenly Twins.

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Post by sheilablunt » January 7th, 2017, 4:46 pm

Hi Linny,
Here is chapter 5. It is 26:33 long. Would you like me to do the next chapter?
Sheila

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_05_barrie+128kb.mp3

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Post by linny » January 8th, 2017, 8:15 am

Hi Sheila,
Chapter 5 is PL OK! Great job on all the bad English. I had to smile at this line "(which is why I always call him Tommy in these pages)".

Ending silence is a little short at 4 seconds. Not worth changing since there were no other edits but please try to get closer to 5 seconds. Also, be careful with the file names. This one has a + instead of an _ before the 128kb. It can be changed before cataloging so do not worry about it. Just something else to keep an eye on.

Stav, I added Sheila's claim for chapter 6.

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Post by miss stav » January 8th, 2017, 10:14 am

Thank you both. Shiela, would you like to continue with chapter 6?
Looking for an easy read? Try Mollie's Pirnce and Nature And Art. Want to read a civil war novel? Try Order Number 11. Like feminist fiction? Try The Hevenly Twins.

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Post by sheilablunt » January 8th, 2017, 4:01 pm

Hi,
Here is chapter 6. I probably won't have time again for a few weeks at which time I'll claim some more chapters. Thanks,
Sheila


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_06_barrie_128kb.mp3
19:39 in length.

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Post by linny » January 8th, 2017, 4:56 pm

Sheila,
I hope you have a wonderful couple of weeks.

PL notes for chapter 6
4:03 “that was what you were to say.
Read as - that what was what

7:37 “Corp,” he said ruefully, “the game is up!”
Read as – she

16:56 It was very naughty of her.
I hear haughty

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