Complete Tommy and Grizel by J. M. Barrie - lt

linny · Post by **linny** » December 29th, 2016, 4:17 pm

Shiela,
I really enjoyed your reading. This sounds like it's going to be a fun book.

PL notes for chapter 3
2:39 repeat and long pause - "Sandys on Woman,"

Since you will be editing the file, there is a noise at 10:07.18 which looks to be easily deleted.

13:00 repeat/stumble "and" he was her attendant for the afternoon

There is a very slight recurring sound in your recording; primarily in the first half. I don't find it troublesome and may simply be that you are moving a bit while recording. I mention it in case you are unaware. No change necessary for this recording. A sample of the sound may be found at 9:01.46

sheilablunt · Post by **sheilablunt** » December 30th, 2016, 7:15 pm

Linny,
The fixes were easy (I hope). thanks for the kind words; the new time is 25:14
Sheila

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_03_barrie_128.mp3

linny · Post by **linny** » December 30th, 2016, 7:25 pm

Hello Sheila,
Great edits. That noise I mentioned moved to 10:02 after the first edit was added so I went ahead and removed it for you. Sometimes when there are multiple edits to make it's easier to correct moving from the end to the beginning of the recording so the time stamps mentioned don't get lost. https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_03_barrie_128.mp3

Spot check PL OK!

miss stav · Post by **miss stav** » December 31st, 2016, 8:21 am

Thank you both. Shiela, chapter 4 is all yours. Have fun.

sheilablunt · Post by **sheilablunt** » January 2nd, 2017, 2:13 pm

Hi Linny,
Here is chapter 4. I show the time at 25:16. I always do my edits from end toward beginning but I don't always pause to write the place on the track ; I am doing that now there is less chance of missing an edit that way. Thanks
Sheila
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_04_barrie_128kb.mp3

miss stav · Post by **miss stav** » January 2nd, 2017, 3:19 pm

Thank you very very much, Shiela. Would you like to continue with chapter 5?

linny · Post by **linny** » January 2nd, 2017, 3:48 pm

Hello Sheila,
Chapter 4 is PL OK! Great book 1 summary chapter. Should be very interesting from here.

sheilablunt · Post by **sheilablunt** » January 6th, 2017, 8:46 pm

Yes, I'll be happy to read chapter 5.
Sheila

sheilablunt · Post by **sheilablunt** » January 6th, 2017, 8:46 pm

Yes, I'll be happy to read chapter 5.
Sheila

miss stav · Post by **miss stav** » January 6th, 2017, 11:38 pm

Thank you

sheilablunt · Post by **sheilablunt** » January 7th, 2017, 4:46 pm

Hi Linny,
Here is chapter 5. It is 26:33 long. Would you like me to do the next chapter?
Sheila

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_05_barrie+128kb.mp3

linny · Post by **linny** » January 8th, 2017, 8:15 am

Hi Sheila,
Chapter 5 is PL OK! Great job on all the bad English. I had to smile at this line "(which is why I always call him Tommy in these pages)".

Ending silence is a little short at 4 seconds. Not worth changing since there were no other edits but please try to get closer to 5 seconds. Also, be careful with the file names. This one has a + instead of an _ before the 128kb. It can be changed before cataloging so do not worry about it. Just something else to keep an eye on.

Stav, I added Sheila's claim for chapter 6.

miss stav · Post by **miss stav** » January 8th, 2017, 10:14 am

Thank you both. Shiela, would you like to continue with chapter 6?

sheilablunt · Post by **sheilablunt** » January 8th, 2017, 4:01 pm

Hi,
Here is chapter 6. I probably won't have time again for a few weeks at which time I'll claim some more chapters. Thanks,
Sheila

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/tommyandgrizel_06_barrie_128kb.mp3
19:39 in length.

linny · Post by **linny** » January 8th, 2017, 4:56 pm

Sheila,
I hope you have a wonderful couple of weeks.

PL notes for chapter 6
4:03 “that was what you were to say.
Read as - that what was what

7:37 “Corp,” he said ruefully, “the game is up!”
Read as – she

16:56 It was very naughty of her.
I hear haughty