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Post Posted:: January 5th, 2017, 6:51 am 
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I had to look at your section text to get context to your question. :) If it were me, I'd say the parenthetical words in a somewhat offhand voice, if possible. Or just use a very brief pause (about enough for a breath) to separate it from the main text. Just do what you can. :)

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Post Posted:: January 5th, 2017, 7:32 pm 

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Thanks for the pointers about the parentheses!

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Post Posted:: January 8th, 2017, 2:39 pm 

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PL for 13 finished - excellent.

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Post Posted:: January 8th, 2017, 3:00 pm 
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Post Posted:: January 8th, 2017, 4:11 pm 

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PL of section 14 very good. There is one minor edit needed. In the first paragraph of the reading in the 9th line from the text p 166, "French and Iroquois" should read "English and Iroquois". Otherwise excellent. :thumbs:

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Post Posted:: January 8th, 2017, 4:44 pm 
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Thanks again! I hope to get to this tomorrow.

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Post Posted:: January 9th, 2017, 10:09 am 
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Section 14 fixed. The fix occurs around 1:12.

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Post Posted:: January 9th, 2017, 6:02 pm 

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well done - very nice. PL AOK :clap:

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Post Posted:: January 9th, 2017, 6:06 pm 
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Post Posted:: January 10th, 2017, 9:57 am 

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section 19 is ready for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mississippivalley_19_shea_128kb.mp3

32m40s

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Post Posted:: January 10th, 2017, 11:10 am 
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Thank you!

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Post Posted:: January 10th, 2017, 6:29 pm 
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Section 19:

25:41 - "composed of... more than a hundred" - long pause in this sentence

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Post Posted:: January 10th, 2017, 9:14 pm 

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ok - i'll tidy up. is that it?

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Post Posted:: January 10th, 2017, 9:32 pm 

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I've made the edit and also went through and cleaned up a few other minor pauses.

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mississippivalley_19_shea_128kb.mp3

32m35s

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Post Posted:: January 11th, 2017, 7:29 am 
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PL OK.

Next time you clean up more than what's requested, would you please post the times of the other edits? I'm trusting you didn't accidentally cut off part of a word or something; I don't want to listen to the whole thing again to be sure. ;)

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