Bravo! I thoroughly enjoyed your skilled reading of the this chapter. And I'm so pleased to have native pronunciation of all of the French.
There are just a few technical things that need attention.
The file name is incorrect. We need the leading zero _05_ This is true all LV projects, so that the files sort correctly.
0:22 – 25 Suggestion: shorten this pause to about 1 – 1.5 seconds
22:05 -08 Again, suggestion to shorten this pause to about 1 – 1.5 seconds
“Read by . . . .” should be either at the beginning of the recording or the end, but not both. So, please delete one.
Please leave FIVE SECONDS of silence at the end
The volume is right at the upper limit for LibriVox recordings, so it would be good to amplify this down. It is now at 92 decibels, and our LV target is 89 dBs with a range of 86-92 dBs.
You can use the little program Checker
https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Checker, written specifically for LibriVox. Just drag a file into the Checker window to check validation on all LV specs, including a readout of actual volume in decibels.
Use the Amplification feature in Audacity to bring the volume closer to the LV target of 89 dB. Set it for -3
Please upload your corrected file, with the proper file name, and post the link and new length here again.
Thank you again for a superb recording!