Thanks again for this chapter! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed the accents. I have some notes, but please don't be discouraged by them - it's not as much as it may look like, considering that this was a relatively long recording!
- At 3:11, after "led down to the lawn," could you include the line "she hastily surveyed the garden"? (p. 2-3)
- At 3:16, after "the room she had just left," could you include the phrase "but not terrible"? (p. 3)
- At 8:20, after "dance of triumph in front of her," could you include the line "'I say, Rose, I've caught you at your tricks'"? (p. 5)
- At 8:59, after "'Here, you hang on to me,'" could you include the phrase "he directed"? (p. 5)
- At 12:12, "when Rose, fully recovered," I hear "when Rose, fully covered" (p. 8)
- At 12:49, "a girl without looks had forfeited her right," you say "a girl without looks had fortified her right" (p. 8)
- At 13:50, "you have forfeited her kindness," you say "you have fortified her kindness" (p. 9)
- At 14:16, “‘She’s like that thing in India that rolls over people,” you say “‘She’s like that thing in India that rolls people over” (p. 9)
- At 21:41, there’s a repeat of “she protested in a stage whisper” (p. 14)
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah
