[COMPLETE] The Mouthpiece of Zitu by J. U. Giesy - icequeen

[kristakz]

I'd like to claim Chapter 17. (I might try 18 thru 20, as well, but let's start with just this first one.)

Chapter 17 is yours. Welcome aboard

Chapter 17 is done. runtime 28:28.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_17_giesy_128kb_mp3.mp3

work just got unexpectedly busy, so I'm going to hold off on claiming any others before the weekend.

(oof, just noticed the duplicate mp3 in the filename. if it's a problem, I can reupload)

No worries. This is queued for PL. If there are PL changes, you can fix the filename, otherwise our MC will take care of it.

[kristakz]

Here are sections 11 thru 15:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_11_giesy_128kb.mp3 (23:41)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_12_giesy_128kb.mp3 (22:13)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_13_giesy_128kb.mp3 (25:39)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_14_giesy_128kb.mp3 (30:52)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_15_giesy_128kb.mp3 (26:26)

thank you

Thank you. THese are queued for PL

[kristakz]

Here are sections 4 thru 10:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/MouthpieceOfZitu_4_geisy_128db.mp3 (16:51)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/MouthpieceOfZitu_5_geisy_128kb.mp3 (28:06)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/MouthpieceOfZitu_6_geisy_128kb.mp3 (31:09)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/MouthpieceOfZitu_7_geisy_128kb.mp3 (37:30)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/MouthpieceOfZitu_8_geisy_128kb.mp3 (26:16)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/MouthpieceOfZitu_9_geisy_128kb.mp3 (27:48)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/MouthpeiceOfZitu_10_geisy_128kb.mp3 (24:48)

Can I claim 11 thru 15?

Section 7 PL notes:

0:30 - pronunciation of Giesy (Ghee-zee)
6:12 - I hear "was almost lest Croft ", text says "was alarmed lest Croft "
7:08 - pronunciation of "Himyra" - should be Him-EYE-ra (I hear "him-ra")
9:56 - pronuncation of "Jasor - should be JAY-sor (I hear jah-sor). Also 9:59, 10:07, 11:20, 18:10, 23:07, 26:35, 28:49,29:12,
25:53 - pronunciation of "Palos" - should be PAY-loss (I hear pah-los). Also 26:08
36:06 - I hear "Robur declared, rising also.", text says "Aye, Robur declared, rising also."

Section 8 PL notes:
0:30 - pronunciation of Giesy (Ghee-zee)
1:28 - pronunciation of "Palos" - should be PAY-loss (I hear pah-los).
15:14 - missing line "That figure had been portrayed as seated on a throne. And the rays of the noontide sun had shone through "

[kristakz]

Here are corrected sections 4 thru 6:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_4_giesy_128kb.mp3 (16:44)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_5_giesy_128kb.mp3 (28:01)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_6_giesy_128kb.mp3 (31:20)

Sections 4 & 6 are PL OK.

Section 5 does not appear to have any changes. Can you please check that you uploaded what you intended?

[tjfria]

Section 5 is corrected

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_5_giesy_128kb.mp3 (28:01)

[tjfria]

Here is the corrected section 7:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_7_giesy_128kb.mp3 (37:20)

[tjfria]

Here is corrected section 8:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_8_giesy_128kb.mp3 (26:22)

[kristakz]

Thank you for those. They are queued for spot PL.

Here are my notes for sections 9 & 10. I'm really enjoying your readings, thank you.

Section 9:
22:08 - pronuncation of "Jasor - should be JAY-sor (I hear jah-sor). Also 22:15, 22:22
26:54 - I hear "I shall breathe", text says "I shall bathe"

Section 10:
0:29 - pronunciation of Giesy (Ghee-zee)
7:02 - pronuncation of "Jasor - should be JAY-sor (I hear jah-sor).
21:29 - missing words "Prince of Aphur? Know you not that in her very glance, her every movement"

[tjfria]

Here are corrected sections 9 and 10:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_9_giesy_128kb.mp3 (27:48)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_10_giesy_128kb.mp3 (24:50)

[kristakz]

Here is the corrected section 7:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_7_giesy_128kb.mp3 (37:20)

Hi,

I noticed that the length of this file changed quite significantly from the previous version (10 seconds shorter), which seems odd for the changes in the PL notes. Did you change something somewhere else?

[tjfria]

Section 7 is correct at 37:20

[kristakz]

I'd like to claim Chapter 17. (I might try 18 thru 20, as well, but let's start with just this first one.)

Chapter 17 is yours. Welcome aboard

Chapter 17 is done. runtime 28:28.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_17_giesy_128kb_mp3.mp3

work just got unexpectedly busy, so I'm going to hold off on claiming any others before the weekend.

(oof, just noticed the duplicate mp3 in the filename. if it's a problem, I can reupload)

Section 17 is PL OK

[pjtravis]

I think there's something wrong with the magic window. I'm supposed to have ch16 which is "Between Himyra and the Sun". I have not submitted yet and the chapter after mine is "In the Grip of War", so that should be 17.

[kristakz]

I think there's something wrong with the magic window. I'm supposed to have ch16 which is "Between Himyra and the Sun". I have not submitted yet and the chapter after mine is "In the Grip of War", so that should be 17.

Oh dear. I'll sort that out. I noticed I had the section 17 link under section 16, so I moved it and thought all was good. I'll look more closely.

Ah I see what I did. All should be correct now (it's very easy to accidentally drag a section to a new location in the MW, which must be what happened - and then I made it worse trying to fix it ).

[pjtravis]

Here is Ch.16. Any feedback is welcome.

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/mouthpieceofzitu_16_giesy_128kb.mp3

(25m:40s)