[COMPLETE] GROUP: Practice of Christian and Religious Perfection, Volume I, by Alphonsus Rodriguez, S.J-mtf

[Owlivia]

Section 36
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/practiceofchristianperfectionv1_36_rodriguez_128kb.mp3
26:38.48

[Mozartjr]

Section 36
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/practiceofchristianperfectionv1_36_rodriguez_128kb.mp3
26:38.48

Thanks!

[benrocampo29]

Hey! Id love to PL sections 3 and 36 if theyre available! ill have them done by tuesday!

[Mozartjr]

Hey! Id love to PL sections 3 and 36 if theyre available! ill have them done by tuesday!

That would be great, Thanks Ben!
Mozartjr

[benrocampo29]

Section 3: Needs editing

All around the reader did a great job and it sounds great. However, at around 13:12 and 13:30 there is an uncorrected error. Theres a slight stumble over your words but you correct yourself immediately after so its an easy edit.

Otherwise i didnt notice any other errors... great job!

[benrocampo29]

Section 36: Needs heavy revising

15:50 has an uncorrected error
15:58 also has an uncorrected error
16:09 you cleared your throat, idk if its a big deal but I would check
16:19 repeat "they were"
16:24 has multiple repeats
16:37 has another repeat
16:53-17:18 lots of uncorrected repeats, clearing of throat, and stumble
17:40 repeat
17:53 repeat
18:06 repeat

Ok, so... I would recommend taking some time to carefully listen from 15:50-20:15. These 5 minutes of the recording have a serious amount of uncorrected errors and need serious revising. I don't think it warrants re recording the entire reading, but it needs a lot of splicing. I left some time stamps above, but the last two minutes also had a lot of repeats and coughing so I would still listen to 18:06-20:15, even though I did not include time stamps in that time frame.

Other than that the reader did great! The 20 minutes that did not contain errors made for a pleasant listen!

[Mozartjr]

Section 36: Needs heavy revising

15:50 has an uncorrected error
15:58 also has an uncorrected error
16:09 you cleared your throat, idk if its a big deal but I would check
16:19 repeat "they were"
16:24 has multiple repeats
16:37 has another repeat
16:53-17:18 lots of uncorrected repeats, clearing of throat, and stumble
17:40 repeat
17:53 repeat
18:06 repeat

Ok, so... I would recommend taking some time to carefully listen from 15:50-20:15. These 5 minutes of the recording have a serious amount of uncorrected errors and need serious revising. I don't think it warrants re recording the entire reading, but it needs a lot of splicing. I left some time stamps above, but the last two minutes also had a lot of repeats and coughing so I would still listen to 18:06-20:15, even though I did not include time stamps in that time frame.

Other than that the reader did great! The 20 minutes that did not contain errors made for a pleasant listen!

Thanks Ben! I'll update the MW.

[Mozartjr]

Section 36
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/practiceofchristianperfectionv1_36_rodriguez_128kb.mp3
26:38.48

Hi there,
This section has been PLed, just so you know!
Mozartjr

[Owlivia]

Section 36: Needs heavy revising

15:50 has an uncorrected error
15:58 also has an uncorrected error
16:09 you cleared your throat, idk if its a big deal but I would check
16:19 repeat "they were"
16:24 has multiple repeats
16:37 has another repeat
16:53-17:18 lots of uncorrected repeats, clearing of throat, and stumble
17:40 repeat
17:53 repeat
18:06 repeat

Ok, so... I would recommend taking some time to carefully listen from 15:50-20:15. These 5 minutes of the recording have a serious amount of uncorrected errors and need serious revising. I don't think it warrants re recording the entire reading, but it needs a lot of splicing. I left some time stamps above, but the last two minutes also had a lot of repeats and coughing so I would still listen to 18:06-20:15, even though I did not include time stamps in that time frame.

Other than that the reader did great! The 20 minutes that did not contain errors made for a pleasant listen!

omg,
Absolute mortification. Proofed only the last section that I did and omitted the section from about 15:00 to 20-something, as you pointed out. What a mess. IF it should ever happen again, past 4 or 5 mess-ups, just kick it back to me; don't endure it.

So. Here is the Improved Version; best suggestion, start at about 15:00 through to the end.
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/practiceofchristianperfectionv1_36_rodriguez_128kb.mp3
25:17.72

AND as an act of Penance
Here is Section 37 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/practiceofchristianperfectionv1_37_rodriguez_128kb.mp3
run time: 14:15.17

best,
Owlivia/Deborah

[Mozartjr]

Section 36: Needs heavy revising

15:50 has an uncorrected error
15:58 also has an uncorrected error
16:09 you cleared your throat, idk if its a big deal but I would check
16:19 repeat "they were"
16:24 has multiple repeats
16:37 has another repeat
16:53-17:18 lots of uncorrected repeats, clearing of throat, and stumble
17:40 repeat
17:53 repeat
18:06 repeat

Ok, so... I would recommend taking some time to carefully listen from 15:50-20:15. These 5 minutes of the recording have a serious amount of uncorrected errors and need serious revising. I don't think it warrants re recording the entire reading, but it needs a lot of splicing. I left some time stamps above, but the last two minutes also had a lot of repeats and coughing so I would still listen to 18:06-20:15, even though I did not include time stamps in that time frame.

Other than that the reader did great! The 20 minutes that did not contain errors made for a pleasant listen!

omg,
Absolute mortification. Proofed only the last section that I did and omitted the section from about 15:00 to 20-something, as you pointed out. What a mess. IF it should ever happen again, past 4 or 5 mess-ups, just kick it back to me; don't endure it.

So. Here is the Improved Version; best suggestion, start at about 15:00 through to the end.
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/practiceofchristianperfectionv1_36_rodriguez_128kb.mp3
25:17.72

AND as an act of Penance
Here is Section 37 -
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/practiceofchristianperfectionv1_37_rodriguez_128kb.mp3
run time: 14:15.17

best,
Owlivia/Deborah

Thanks, I'll enter it in the MW.

[Mozartjr]

Section 3: Needs editing

All around the reader did a great job and it sounds great. However, at around 13:12 and 13:30 there is an uncorrected error. Theres a slight stumble over your words but you correct yourself immediately after so its an easy edit.

Otherwise i didnt notice any other errors... great job!

This will be edited soon...if you are interested in subscribing as DPL for the whole project, Devorah the MC could give you access to the MW
Or if you would like to read a section or two, just let me know
Mozartjr

[marissa27]

Fifth Treatise, Chaps 4 & 5
Owlivia

Section 36

-0.5-1 second of silence at intro
-no background noise/pauses
-recording is perfect not too loud/quiet
-no repeats

End: 5 seconds of silence

[marissa27]

Fifth Treatise, Chaps 6 & 7
Section 37

-0.5-1 second of silence at intro
-no background noise/pauses
-recording is perfect not too loud/quiet
-no repeats

End: 5 seconds of silence

[DanielBader]

I'd like to claim:

10 Second Treatise, Chaps 1 & 2

[Mozartjr]

I'd like to claim:

10 Second Treatise, Chaps 1 & 2

Great! Thanks!
Mozartjr