[COMPLETE] GROUP - Civilisation: Its Cause and Cure, and Other Essays, by Edward Carpenter - ke

[vviera]

right you are. Here's the correction


https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_07_carpenter_128kb.mp3

Cz

Sec. 7 PL OK

[tding]

Section 9 has been updated at https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_09_carpenter_128kb.mp3 (40:25), ready for PL.
Tina

26:07 text half-starved, heard self-starved;

29:17 and 30:16 background noise;

take a listen to 30:56-32:51. There are several instances of rustling background noise, some more distracting than others, with a mike tap at that 32:51 mark. You might want to rerecord all or part. I'll let you decide; at 31:50, which falls during that segment, text define, heard defined - so that might be during a rerecord and taken care of that way;

33:58 text restive, heard rustic

I didn't hear anything goofy in the silence this time, so let's cross our fingers on that!

Thanks,
Verla

Hello, Verla,

Thanks for the attention to details. An updated version of Section 9 was uploaded just now at
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_09_carpenter_128kb.mp3 (40:25).

Tina

[vviera]

Thanks for the attention to details. An updated version of Section 9 was uploaded just now at
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_09_carpenter_128kb.mp3 (40:25).

Tina

Sounds great, Tina, thank you! PL OK

[jakemalizia]

I've heard back from Jonathan (joldsworth), I'm just waiting to see if he would like an extension, or to give up his section.

Thanks

[jakemalizia]

In the interest of speeding this project along a bit, I'm going to claim Sections 5 and 6.

[jakemalizia]

Here are Section 5 and 6:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_05_carpenter_128kb.mp3 - 35m10s
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_06_carpenter_128kb.mp3 - 36m55s

No rush to PL though, Verla. I'm just getting the recording done because I won't have much time to record in the coming week.

[vviera]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_05_carpenter_128kb.mp3 - 35m10s

Hi Jake -

I didn't PL this whole thing. There is something going on in the background through much of it that is a soft rattle/tick/whir. I first noticed it at 14:04-14:06, but listen to other examples at 18:32, 18:43, 20:38, 21:35, 22:20, and 23:02. It sounds like maybe a printer is running in the other room or something? Please give a listen and tell me what you think. You can mostly hear the noise during brief silences in the narration, but once my ear caught it, I kept hearing it behind even much of the speech.

FWIW, prior to that I had made these two notes:
1:17 text - already; heard - always
13:58 text - the first place; heard - the place

[jakemalizia]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_05_carpenter_128kb.mp3 - 35m10s

Hi Jake -

I didn't PL this whole thing. There is something going on in the background through much of it that is a soft rattle/tick/whir. I first noticed it at 14:04-14:06, but listen to other examples at 18:32, 18:43, 20:38, 21:35, 22:20, and 23:02. It sounds like maybe a printer is running in the other room or something? Please give a listen and tell me what you think. You can mostly hear the noise during brief silences in the narration, but once my ear caught it, I kept hearing it behind even much of the speech.

FWIW, prior to that I had made these two notes:
1:17 text - already; heard - always
13:58 text - the first place; heard - the place

It was raining really hard when I recorded this. I think it must've shown in the background more than I suspected. I'll see if I can clean it some more. Thanks

[vviera]

Wow. That's some hard rain! (And you're up early for a Saturday.}

[jakemalizia]

Wow. That's some hard rain! (And you're up early for a Saturday.}

It was torrential! Any annoyingly when I edited this, it was still raining hard outside so I found it difficult to differentiate if what I was hearing was on the recording or if it was outside in real time

My wake up time is ingrained into me have a good weekend Verla!

[vviera]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_06_carpenter_128kb.mp3 - 36m55s

Just one thing on PL:
29:15 text: possible; heard: probable

Though I will be spending the rest of the weekend thinking about the concept "pure monkey." This guy is pretty funny sometimes.

[jakemalizia]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_06_carpenter_128kb.mp3 - 36m55s

Just one thing on PL:
29:15 text: possible; heard: probable

Though I will be spending the rest of the weekend thinking about the concept "pure monkey." This guy is pretty funny sometimes.

He has a way with words

Here's the edited Section 6 ready for spot PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_06_carpenter_128kb.mp3

[jakemalizia]

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_05_carpenter_128kb.mp3 - 35m10s

Hi Jake -

I didn't PL this whole thing. There is something going on in the background through much of it that is a soft rattle/tick/whir. I first noticed it at 14:04-14:06, but listen to other examples at 18:32, 18:43, 20:38, 21:35, 22:20, and 23:02. It sounds like maybe a printer is running in the other room or something? Please give a listen and tell me what you think. You can mostly hear the noise during brief silences in the narration, but once my ear caught it, I kept hearing it behind even much of the speech.

FWIW, prior to that I had made these two notes:
1:17 text - already; heard - always
13:58 text - the first place; heard - the place

Okay so I've done some editing. I really hope it's an improvement. I think you must have a keener ear than me because I spotted some of the issues but it was quite subtle to me. Let me know if it's still too distracting - I may have to re-record
I also fixed the two slips you mentioned.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_05_carpenter_128kb.mp3

[vviera]

Okay so I've done some editing. I really hope it's an improvement. I think you must have a keener ear than me because I spotted some of the issues but it was quite subtle to me. Let me know if it's still too distracting - I may have to re-record

I'm going to listen to it with cheaper headphones. I use a pair of studio quality that a sweet friend of mine who has a background in music recording and radio gave me. It's great for my own editing, but I doubt that many LV users are going to listen to our content using something like that. I'll let you know.

[vviera]

Here's the edited Section 6 ready for spot PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/civilisation_06_carpenter_128kb.mp3

PL OK. I'm going to try to look at 5, but internet's been a bit squirrelly tonight.