Just a few notes for Vol. 1, Letters 1-4:
Letter 1: At 3:49, the word should be presented, not pretended. If it can be corrected, that would be great, since it affects the meaning of the sentence.
Letter 1: At 4:45 a repetition could be removed...."be still, thou restless...."
Letter 1: At 5:31 until the end, please check to see if you're comfortable with the sound of plosives in words like "suppose," "be," "present," etc.
Letter 2: PL Okay--there are some plosives, but it's better than the first letter.
Letter 3: PL Okay
Letter 4: PL Okay
Thanks. I will check back, and in the meantime continue listening to your other recordings. Take care, Lora