[COMPLETE] Canada and Other Poems, by Thomas Frederick Young - icequeen

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dokaloka wrote: June 7th, 2022, 4:36 pm Section 28 "Thought"

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_28_young_128kb.mp3 (1:52)
Thank you for the lovely readings. This is PL OK, as are 18 & 32 :thumbs:
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kristakz wrote: June 7th, 2022, 6:45 pm
Thank you Jim. These are all PL OK :thumbs:
Yay! Thank you! :clap:
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kristakz wrote: May 26th, 2022, 7:04 pm
alattice wrote: May 26th, 2022, 6:31 pm Hi! Can I claim these?

13 love and wine,
20 Autumn,
30 Farewell,
38 a snow storm,
55 ode to man
You bet! Welcome aboard :)
Here's 20 - Autumn(3:10)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_20_young_128kb.mp3
and 38 - A Snow Storm(2:32),
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_38_young_128kb.mp3

checker says autumn has some noise but i can't see or hear any in Audacity :/

I'll keep working on the rest
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alattice wrote: June 10th, 2022, 4:07 pm
kristakz wrote: May 26th, 2022, 7:04 pm
alattice wrote: May 26th, 2022, 6:31 pm Hi! Can I claim these?

13 love and wine,
20 Autumn,
30 Farewell,
38 a snow storm,
55 ode to man
You bet! Welcome aboard :)
Here's 20 - Autumn(3:10)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_20_young_128kb.mp3
and 38 - A Snow Storm(2:32),
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_38_young_128kb.mp3

checker says autumn has some noise but i can't see or hear any in Audacity :/

I'll keep working on the rest
Thank you very much for these readings. I hear no noise in either recording. I think Checker may be confused because you don't have a full 5 seconds of silence at the end.
There are a couple of notes (mostly on pronunciations):

Section 20:
0:59 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een". The purpose of the apostrophe is to drop a syllable, to keep the rhythm.
1:11 - "funereal" should have 4 syllables: fyoo·nee·ree·uhl
1:30 - "once it us'd to go" us'd is "used"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.

Section 38:
00:53 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een".
1:55 - I hear "from Ophea's mine", text says "from Ophir's mine"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
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Thank you Karen, very nicely read. Section 58 is PL OK. :thumbs:

Just one note for Section 42:

0:34 - "And eyes with fix'd and rigid stare" - "fix'd" should be only one syllable. I hear "fix-ed", should be "fixd". Also a bit of a stumble on "eyes" right before that.
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Thank you. 63 is PL OK :thumbs:
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kristakz wrote: June 11th, 2022, 1:37 pm
Thank you very much for these readings. I hear no noise in either recording. I think Checker may be confused because you don't have a full 5 seconds of silence at the end.
There are a couple of notes (mostly on pronunciations):

Section 20:
0:59 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een". The purpose of the apostrophe is to drop a syllable, to keep the rhythm.
1:11 - "funereal" should have 4 syllables: fyoo·nee·ree·uhl
1:30 - "once it us'd to go" us'd is "used"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.

Section 38:
00:53 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een".
1:55 - I hear "from Ophea's mine", text says "from Ophir's mine"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
Thank you for the corrections~
Here are the new ones:
20 - https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_20_young_128kb.mp3
38 - https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_38_young_128kb.mp3

I'm not sure if I read "funereal" correctly so if this isn't good I might need more guidance.
Thanks
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alattice wrote: June 11th, 2022, 3:03 pm
kristakz wrote: June 11th, 2022, 1:37 pm
Thank you very much for these readings. I hear no noise in either recording. I think Checker may be confused because you don't have a full 5 seconds of silence at the end.
There are a couple of notes (mostly on pronunciations):

Section 20:
0:59 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een". The purpose of the apostrophe is to drop a syllable, to keep the rhythm.
1:11 - "funereal" should have 4 syllables: fyoo·nee·ree·uhl
1:30 - "once it us'd to go" us'd is "used"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.

Section 38:
00:53 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een".
1:55 - I hear "from Ophea's mine", text says "from Ophir's mine"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
Thank you for the corrections~
Here are the new ones:
20 - https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_20_young_128kb.mp3
38 - https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_38_young_128kb.mp3

I'm not sure if I read "funereal" correctly so if this isn't good I might need more guidance.
Thanks
Thank you. 38 is PL OK now.

Maybe this will help with "funereal"? There are 2 audio links. Sorry, I should have provided this earlier.
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/pronunciation/english/funereal
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May I claim #4 and #59? Thanks!
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dokaloka wrote: June 12th, 2022, 8:52 am May I claim #4 and #59? Thanks!
They are yours :)
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Hello, could I please read sections 45 and 49?
Thank you!
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kyouhanaie wrote: June 12th, 2022, 10:39 am Hello, could I please read sections 45 and 49?
Thank you!
They are yours. Welcome aboard!
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