Thank you for the lovely readings. This is PL OK, as are 18 & 32dokaloka wrote: ↑June 7th, 2022, 4:36 pm Section 28 "Thought"
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_28_young_128kb.mp3 (1:52)
[COMPLETE] Canada and Other Poems, by Thomas Frederick Young - icequeen
Yay! Thank you!kristakz wrote: ↑June 7th, 2022, 6:45 pmThank you Jim. These are all PL OKJimLawter wrote: ↑June 7th, 2022, 3:30 pm Here are the holidays...
New Year's Day, 2:22
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_01_young_128kb.mp3
Christmas, 1:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_21_young_128kb.mp3
Thanksgiving Day, 1:22
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_57_young_128kb.mp3
St. Patrick's Day, 2:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_68_young_128kb.mp3
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Section 63 - Burns
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_63_young_128kb.mp3
3.35
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_63_young_128kb.mp3
3.35
Alan
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
Section 42 - A Dream
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_42_young_128kb.mp3 (02:08)
Section 58 - A Sunset
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_58_young_128kb.mp3 (02:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_42_young_128kb.mp3 (02:08)
Section 58 - A Sunset
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_58_young_128kb.mp3 (02:21)
Here's 20 - Autumn(3:10)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_20_young_128kb.mp3
and 38 - A Snow Storm(2:32),
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_38_young_128kb.mp3
checker says autumn has some noise but i can't see or hear any in Audacity :/
I'll keep working on the rest
Thank you very much for these readings. I hear no noise in either recording. I think Checker may be confused because you don't have a full 5 seconds of silence at the end.alattice wrote: ↑June 10th, 2022, 4:07 pmHere's 20 - Autumn(3:10)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_20_young_128kb.mp3
and 38 - A Snow Storm(2:32),
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_38_young_128kb.mp3
checker says autumn has some noise but i can't see or hear any in Audacity :/
I'll keep working on the rest
There are a couple of notes (mostly on pronunciations):
Section 20:
0:59 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een". The purpose of the apostrophe is to drop a syllable, to keep the rhythm.
1:11 - "funereal" should have 4 syllables: fyoo·nee·ree·uhl
1:30 - "once it us'd to go" us'd is "used"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
Section 38:
00:53 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een".
1:55 - I hear "from Ophea's mine", text says "from Ophir's mine"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
Krista
Thank you Karen, very nicely read. Section 58 is PL OK.KarenB wrote: ↑June 9th, 2022, 1:30 pm Section 42 - A Dream
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_42_young_128kb.mp3 (02:08)
Section 58 - A Sunset
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_58_young_128kb.mp3 (02:21)
Just one note for Section 42:
0:34 - "And eyes with fix'd and rigid stare" - "fix'd" should be only one syllable. I hear "fix-ed", should be "fixd". Also a bit of a stumble on "eyes" right before that.
Krista
Thank you. 63 is PL OKalanmapstone wrote: ↑June 9th, 2022, 9:31 am Section 63 - Burns
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_63_young_128kb.mp3
3.35
Krista
Thank you for the corrections~kristakz wrote: ↑June 11th, 2022, 1:37 pm
Thank you very much for these readings. I hear no noise in either recording. I think Checker may be confused because you don't have a full 5 seconds of silence at the end.
There are a couple of notes (mostly on pronunciations):
Section 20:
0:59 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een". The purpose of the apostrophe is to drop a syllable, to keep the rhythm.
1:11 - "funereal" should have 4 syllables: fyoo·nee·ree·uhl
1:30 - "once it us'd to go" us'd is "used"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
Section 38:
00:53 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een".
1:55 - I hear "from Ophea's mine", text says "from Ophir's mine"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
Here are the new ones:
20 - https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_20_young_128kb.mp3
38 - https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_38_young_128kb.mp3
I'm not sure if I read "funereal" correctly so if this isn't good I might need more guidance.
Thanks
Thank you. 38 is PL OK now.alattice wrote: ↑June 11th, 2022, 3:03 pmThank you for the corrections~kristakz wrote: ↑June 11th, 2022, 1:37 pm
Thank you very much for these readings. I hear no noise in either recording. I think Checker may be confused because you don't have a full 5 seconds of silence at the end.
There are a couple of notes (mostly on pronunciations):
Section 20:
0:59 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een". The purpose of the apostrophe is to drop a syllable, to keep the rhythm.
1:11 - "funereal" should have 4 syllables: fyoo·nee·ree·uhl
1:30 - "once it us'd to go" us'd is "used"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
Section 38:
00:53 - "E'en" should be pronounced "een".
1:55 - I hear "from Ophea's mine", text says "from Ophir's mine"
The ending silence is too short. Please increase to 5 seconds.
Here are the new ones:
20 - https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_20_young_128kb.mp3
38 - https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_38_young_128kb.mp3
I'm not sure if I read "funereal" correctly so if this isn't good I might need more guidance.
Thanks
Maybe this will help with "funereal"? There are 2 audio links. Sorry, I should have provided this earlier.
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/pronunciation/english/funereal
Krista
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Hello, could I please read sections 45 and 49?
Thank you!
Thank you!
They are yours. Welcome aboard!kyouhanaie wrote: ↑June 12th, 2022, 10:39 am Hello, could I please read sections 45 and 49?
Thank you!
Krista
Here's Section 15 at 2:59
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_15_young_128kb.mp3
~~~~~
Bruce.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/canadaandotherpoems_15_young_128kb.mp3
~~~~~
Bruce.