[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 19 - kit
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_02_various_128kb.mp3 time 46:15
Hello Sonia,
Finally I am posting section 02 for this thread, I do hope it passes muster as I did devote some effort for this one. I did not seem to have missing pages, 294-295, and the story to me seemed to flow well to me.
April
Hello Sonia,
Finally I am posting section 02 for this thread, I do hope it passes muster as I did devote some effort for this one. I did not seem to have missing pages, 294-295, and the story to me seemed to flow well to me.
April
ah that is because you probably used the link I gave you in the MW, that's the link where the two missing pages are included. So all is well, everything is included.adr6090 wrote: ↑August 30th, 2021, 10:02 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_02_various_128kb.mp3 time 46:15
Finally I am posting section 02 for this thread, I do hope it passes muster as I did devote some effort for this one. I did not seem to have missing pages, 294-295, and the story to me seemed to flow well to me.
And wow it was a powerful story, and you narrated it wonderfully. The happy end unfortunately came too late for the poor old father.
I only have three PL notes for you to correct, so this was outstanding work, considering the lengthy section.
> at 0:32: "by John MacKay Wilson" - you forgot to say "Wilson"
> from 10:36 to 10:50: you need not re-do the whole intro at this point. Gliding over into the title like you did right before 10:36 is fully enough. So you can cut out all from "The Rover Volume 1" to "John Mackay Wilson" at this point. Maybe I wasn't precise enough in my former explanations. But the LV disclaimer needs only to come at the very beginning of a section, never like this in the middle.
> at 41:09: (p. 295) "and he had acquired" - you say "abandoned it"
Thank you
Sonia
Hello Sonia,
Below is section 02, all edits taken care of. Thank you for listening to this section.
Please do give another listen and let me know the results.
April
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_02_various_128kb.mp3 time 46.00
Below is section 02, all edits taken care of. Thank you for listening to this section.
Please do give another listen and let me know the results.
April
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_02_various_128kb.mp3 time 46.00
thank you, April, prefectly patched and now PL ok
I see your next two sections are much shorter must come as a relief
Sonia
haha the Shakespeare poetry attempt was funny (although a bit cruel to laugh). Both sections are PL ok right away, April, thank you so much. Hope to hear you in another Rover again one day.adr6090 wrote: ↑September 5th, 2021, 10:30 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_09_various_128kb.mp3 1:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_13_various_128kb.mp3 2:41
Now only one final story left to tell... we are close to wrapping this up.
Sonia
for the pl okay.Kitty wrote: ↑September 6th, 2021, 8:43 amhaha the Shakespeare poetry attempt was funny (although a bit cruel to laugh). Both sections are PL ok right away, April, thank you so much. Hope to hear you in another Rover again one day.adr6090 wrote: ↑September 5th, 2021, 10:30 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_09_various_128kb.mp3 1:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_13_various_128kb.mp3 2:41
Now only one final story left to tell... we are close to wrapping this up.
Sonia
April
yay, thank you for making us fully claimed again, Jim
back to readers found...
Sonia
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Here is Section 5--funny business!
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25:10
Jim
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25:10
Jim
this was ultra funny. Yes, the dangers of reading the secret thoughts of people but it's best that he learnt the truth that way. I really loved this story, and thank you for the ultra fast turn-around now at the end here, Jim.
Absolutely PL ok. First I wanted to comment on your added "exclamation marks" because usually we don't add anything of that kind. But further on I realized this is very important for the story, so it was a good option
And that means, we're ready for the catalogue.
Huge thanks to all the readers of this issue of the Rover: Mike, April, Alan, Jim, Adrian, Michael (and myself) Hope to be hearing you all in further Rovers down the road.
Will post the link once it's passed through.
Sonia
and we're in the box
This project is now complete! All audio files can now be found on the catalog page for this project https://librivox.org/rover-01-19-by-various/
Thank you all
Moving to Completed....
Sonia
This project is now complete! All audio files can now be found on the catalog page for this project https://librivox.org/rover-01-19-by-various/
Thank you all
Moving to Completed....
Sonia
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Yes, I didn't know what to do with the exclamation marks. At first, I added in words of exclamation, such as What?! or No! But I didn't think I should do that. But as you say, it was a specifically designed part of the story, given the 1-6 escalation of them. So I did what I thought was intended and awaited your decision on the matter. Of course, I wouldn't have minded excising them. Yours, Jim