[COMPLETE][Magazine][Short Stories]The Rover Vol. 01 No. 19 - kit

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 30th, 2021, 10:02 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_02_various_128kb.mp3 time 46:15

Hello Sonia,
Finally I am posting section 02 for this thread, I do hope it passes muster as I did devote some effort for this one. I did not seem to have missing pages, 294-295, and the story to me seemed to flow well to me.
April

Post by **Kitty** » August 31st, 2021, 4:52 am

adr6090 wrote: ↑August 30th, 2021, 10:02 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_02_various_128kb.mp3 time 46:15
Finally I am posting section 02 for this thread, I do hope it passes muster as I did devote some effort for this one. I did not seem to have missing pages, 294-295, and the story to me seemed to flow well to me.

ah that is because you probably used the link I gave you in the MW, that's the link where the two missing pages are included.

So all is well, everything is included.

And wow it was a powerful story, and you narrated it wonderfully. The happy end unfortunately came too late for the poor old father.

I only have three PL notes for you to correct, so this was outstanding work, considering the lengthy section.

> at 0:32: "by John MacKay Wilson" - you forgot to say "Wilson"

> from 10:36 to 10:50: you need not re-do the whole intro at this point. Gliding over into the title like you did right before 10:36 is fully enough. So you can cut out all from "The Rover Volume 1" to "John Mackay Wilson" at this point. Maybe I wasn't precise enough in my former explanations. But the LV disclaimer needs only to come at the very beginning of a section, never like this in the middle.

> at 41:09: (p. 295) "and he had acquired" - you say "abandoned it"

Thank you

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » August 31st, 2021, 1:39 pm

Hello Sonia,
Below is section 02, all edits taken care of. Thank you for listening to this section.

Please do give another listen and let me know the results.
April

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_02_various_128kb.mp3 time 46.00

Post by **Kitty** » September 1st, 2021, 1:15 am

adr6090 wrote: ↑August 31st, 2021, 1:39 pmBelow is section 02, all edits taken care of. Thank you for listening to this section.
Please do give another listen and let me know the results.

thank you, April, prefectly patched and now PL ok

I see your next two sections are much shorter

must come as a relief

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » September 1st, 2021, 8:42 am

Thank you ! Yes, I also noticed the size of my next 2 sections.

Kitty wrote: ↑September 1st, 2021, 1:15 am
adr6090 wrote: ↑August 31st, 2021, 1:39 pmBelow is section 02, all edits taken care of. Thank you for listening to this section.
Please do give another listen and let me know the results.
thank you, April, prefectly patched and now PL ok

I see your next two sections are much shorter must come as a relief

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » September 5th, 2021, 10:30 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_09_various_128kb.mp3 1:32

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_13_various_128kb.mp3 2:41

Post by **Kitty** » September 6th, 2021, 8:43 am

adr6090 wrote: ↑September 5th, 2021, 10:30 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_09_various_128kb.mp3 1:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_13_various_128kb.mp3 2:41

haha the Shakespeare poetry attempt was funny (although a bit cruel to laugh). Both sections are PL ok right away, April, thank you so much.

Hope to hear you in another Rover again one day.

Now only one final story left to tell... we are close to wrapping this up.

Sonia

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » September 6th, 2021, 4:30 pm

Kitty wrote: ↑September 6th, 2021, 8:43 am
adr6090 wrote: ↑September 5th, 2021, 10:30 amhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_09_various_128kb.mp3 1:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_13_various_128kb.mp3 2:41
haha the Shakespeare poetry attempt was funny (although a bit cruel to laugh). Both sections are PL ok right away, April, thank you so much. Hope to hear you in another Rover again one day.

Now only one final story left to tell... we are close to wrapping this up.

Sonia

for the pl okay.

Post by **Kitty** » September 19th, 2021, 10:43 pm

Announcement:

Since I haven't heard back from the original claimant, Section 5 is up for grabs again. The last section of this project, we're so close now !!

Back to Readers Wanted

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » September 29th, 2021, 1:55 am

May I claim Section 5? Jim

Post by **Kitty** » September 29th, 2021, 1:56 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 29th, 2021, 1:55 amMay I claim Section 5?

yay, thank you for making us fully claimed again, Jim

back to readers found...

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » September 29th, 2021, 10:23 am

Here is Section 5--funny business!

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/rover0119_05_various_128kb.mp3

25:10

Jim

Post by **Kitty** » September 30th, 2021, 1:46 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑September 29th, 2021, 10:23 amHere is Section 5--funny business!

this was ultra funny. Yes, the dangers of reading the secret thoughts of people

but it's best that he learnt the truth that way. I really loved this story, and thank you for the ultra fast turn-around now at the end here, Jim.

Absolutely PL ok. First I wanted to comment on your added "exclamation marks" because usually we don't add anything of that kind. But further on I realized this is very important for the story, so it was a good option

And that means, we're ready for the catalogue.

Huge thanks to all the readers of this issue of the Rover: Mike, April, Alan, Jim, Adrian, Michael (and myself)

Hope to be hearing you all in further Rovers down the road.

Will post the link once it's passed through.

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » September 30th, 2021, 2:37 am

and we're in the box

This project is now complete! All audio files can now be found on the catalog page for this project https://librivox.org/rover-01-19-by-various/

Thank you all

Moving to Completed....

Sonia

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » September 30th, 2021, 6:52 am

Yes, I didn't know what to do with the exclamation marks. At first, I added in words of exclamation, such as What?! or No! But I didn't think I should do that. But as you say, it was a specifically designed part of the story, given the 1-6 escalation of them. So I did what I thought was intended and awaited your decision on the matter. Of course, I wouldn't have minded excising them. Yours, Jim