Just a few phrases need to be corrected.
About 3:33, I hear "take a look" the text reads "take a book".
About 5:34, the word "and" is repeated.
About 7:41 I hear "he wanted to bite it into his mouth whole", the text reads "he wanted to put it into his mouth whole".
Your reading is very clear and understandable. I suggest that in future you try to eliminate the mouth clicks as much as possible as this would improve the quality of the recording. You have a nice voice and I would like to see it come through as best as possible.
Thanks,
M
(I find it appalling that any human being would be called a coal scuttle. I guess that was just a sign of the times.)