COMPLETE: The American Bee Journal, Vol. VI, No. 4, October 1870, by Various-jo

[silverquill]

Thank you for the feedback. I've incorporated your advice, and hopefully this one sounds a bit better. (Happy to give it another shot though, ha!)

Here's the recording:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_06_various_128kb.mp3

File duration is 05:42.

Thank you!
Marked Ready for PL
Please stay tuned for your report.

[silverquill]

Hello
Here are Sections # 16 and 17.

Section#16 Duration: 4:10 minutes
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_16_various_128kb.mp3

Section#17 Duration: 4:18 minutes
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_17_various_128kb.mp3

Thanks

Thank you!
Marked Ready for PL
Please stay tuned for your report.

[silverquill]

Section 21 is ready:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_21_various_128kb.mp3 (7:50)

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Marked Ready for PL
Please stay tuned for your report.

[HandmadePSK]

Section 9 is ready for proof listening:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_09_various_128kb.mp3. (04:33)

Very good, thanx!

[HandmadePSK]

Hey everybody!

Is it all right to say "Section number so-and-so" in the intro?
Thanx!

[HandmadePSK]

Thank you for the feedback. I've incorporated your advice, and hopefully this one sounds a bit better. (Happy to give it another shot though, ha!)

Here's the recording:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_06_various_128kb.mp3

File duration is 05:42.

Sec 06 PL notes:

00:37 - section`s title in the intro should be exactly “Report of Apiary in 1870 / Four-Banded Bees”, as far as I see in the MW.
05:33 – consequently, the “Four-Banded Bees” should be read too.

The sound is good.
Cheers & blessings!

[HandmadePSK]

Section 21 is ready:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_21_various_128kb.mp3 (7:50)

Simply perfect, thank you!

[silverquill]

Hey everybody!

Is it all right to say "Section number so-and-so" in the intro?
Thanx!

Yes.

The new project template could maybe be a little clearer, so I'll change it a bit, but this variation is fine.

Also, for sections with more than one article, it is best to include them both in the intro, but I wouldn't quibble if it is done differently. We can be flexible here.

[shenzuul]

Thank you for the feedback. I've incorporated your advice, and hopefully this one sounds a bit better. (Happy to give it another shot though, ha!)

Here's the recording:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_06_various_128kb.mp3

File duration is 05:42.

Sec 06 PL notes:

00:37 - section`s title in the intro should be exactly “Report of Apiary in 1870 / Four-Banded Bees”, as far as I see in the MW.
05:33 – consequently, the “Four-Banded Bees” should be read too.

The sound is good.
Cheers & blessings!

Ahhhhh, thanks, missed that entirely. Should I combine both headers as you've described at 00:37, or should I add "The American Bee Journal, Vol. VI, No. 4, October 1870, by Various. Four-Banded Bees" at 05:33 before reading the second part?

[HandmadePSK]

Ahhhhh, thanks, missed that entirely. Should I combine both headers as you've described at 00:37, or should I add "The American Bee Journal, Vol. VI, No. 4, October 1870, by Various. Four-Banded Bees" at 05:33 before reading the second part?

If I understand well a more experienced librivoxer just upper here,

Also, for sections with more than one article, it is best to include them both in the intro, but I wouldn't quibble if it is done differently. We can be flexible here.

I believe, it will be enough:
1) do not change intro at all - OR do it ONLY if you are a perfectionist like me)
In that case, it would be good to combine both headers as I've described at 00:37.
2) after first part, to say simply "Four-Banded Bees" and go on with that chapter.

In fact, you sound very good!

[HandmadePSK]

Section#16 Duration: 4:10 minutes
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_16_various_128kb.mp3
Section#17 Duration: 4:18 minutes
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_17_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks

Sec 16 PL notes:

01:14 – some stumblings in “Bee Journal”
03:31 – ” J. H. THOMAS. Brooklin, Ontario.” Has to be read too, please.
04:04 – “B. R. HOPKINS. Tyrone, Pa.“ Has to be read too, please.

Sec 17 PL notes:

The volume falls outside of the target range (86–92 dB); now is 85.7 dB.

04:15 - C. C. MILLER. Marengo, Ill., Aug. 30, 1870. Has to be read too, please.

Remember please there is no need to re-record all the pieces, it wil be enough to make little correspondent inserts.
Cheers & blessings!

[FrancescNello]

Here is my upload of section 05. Length is: 9:47
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_05_various_128kb.mp3
Thank you

Sec 05 PL notes:
The volume falls outside of the target range (86–92 dB), being 85.5 dB.

The rest is all right.

Here is my reupload. I don't understand why this happens. :/ I hope it's the right volume this time. Length is still 9:47

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_05_various_128kb.mp3

Thank you

[silverquill]

Here is my upload of section 05. Length is: 9:47
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_05_various_128kb.mp3
Thank you

Sec 05 PL notes:
The volume falls outside of the target range (86–92 dB), being 85.5 dB.

The rest is all right.

Here is my reupload. I don't understand why this happens. :/ I hope it's the right volume this time. Length is still 9:47

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_05_various_128kb.mp3

Thank you

Thank you.
Ready for Spot PL.

[HandmadePSK]

Here is my reupload. I don't understand why this happens. :/ I hope it's the right volume this time. Length is still 9:47

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/americanbeejournaloct1870_05_various_128kb.mp3

Thank you

Now it`s all right, thanx!

[RoslynE]

Hello, am I correct that Section 18: Around among Apiaries is unclaimed? If so I'd like to try my hand at it!