[COMPLETE][History]World's Story 15: The World War - kit
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time19:43
Here is section 11 & the Kitchener mob is now en route.....
Here is section 11 & the Kitchener mob is now en route.....
April
of course, thank you Jim
Sonia
thank you, April, always interesting, what "Kitchener's Mob" is up to nice narrative, and excellent French pronunciationadr6090 wrote: ↑April 27th, 2021, 4:21 pmhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time19:43
Here is section 11 & the Kitchener mob is now en route.....
Just two notes to correct:
> at 0:44: (p. 44) missed part of sentence (underlined): "his bayonet, the long single-edged blade"
> from 16:24-19:38: for some reason, the last 2 pages are repeated here, starting from the end of page 50 "Within a few moments" till the end of the section. You can cut all this, or maybe check which version you wanted to keep
Thanks
Sonia
Hello Sonia
I will get the issues that you have mentioned taken care of.
Thank you,
April
I will get the issues that you have mentioned taken care of.
Thank you,
April
Kitty wrote: ↑April 28th, 2021, 3:43 amthank you, April, always interesting, what "Kitchener's Mob" is up to nice narrative, and excellent French pronunciationadr6090 wrote: ↑April 27th, 2021, 4:21 pmhttps://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time19:43
Here is section 11 & the Kitchener mob is now en route.....
Just two notes to correct:
> at 0:44: (p. 44) missed part of sentence (underlined): "his bayonet, the long single-edged blade"
> from 16:24-19:38: for some reason, the last 2 pages are repeated here, starting from the end of page 50 "Within a few moments" till the end of the section. You can cut all this, or maybe check which version you wanted to keep
Thanks
Sonia
Sonia,
Here is my edited file.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time 16:29
Here is my edited file.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_11_dresser_128kb.mp3 time 16:29
April
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action packed ! thanks, Jim.neecheelok70 wrote: ↑April 29th, 2021, 12:24 pmHere is Section 26:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_26_dresser_128kb.mp3
I only found a small spot to correct:
> at 14:17: (p. 155) stumble and repeat: "the admirable McSnape" – can be cut once. Also I think "M'Snape" is the abbreviation for "MacSnape". I have encountered that quite often already in old books. Sometimes you say "Mac" sometimes only "M". This is optional however, no need to correct it everywhere
Thanks
Sonia
and here are my last two shorties, for whenever you have time to PL, Jim thanks
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_01_dresser_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:56 min.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_02_dresser_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:32 min.
Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_01_dresser_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:56 min.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_02_dresser_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:32 min.
Sonia
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Sections 1 and2 are perfectly PL OK. Jim
thank you, Jim
Sonia
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Here is the corrected 26:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_26_dresser_128kb.mp3
20:07
Jim
I started to go back to fix the McSnakes, but I then realized you would have to go back and PL them. But if you want me to, I gladly will.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_26_dresser_128kb.mp3
20:07
Jim
I started to go back to fix the McSnakes, but I then realized you would have to go back and PL them. But if you want me to, I gladly will.
no it's not necessary, otherwise I would have given you the time stamps. No worries. So you only corrected that one repeat ? Then it's PL ok, thanksneecheelok70 wrote: ↑April 30th, 2021, 6:07 am Here is the corrected 26:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_26_dresser_128kb.mp3
I started to go back to fix the McSnakes, but I then realized you would have to go back and PL them. But if you want me to, I gladly will.
Sonia