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Lmnei
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Section 31

Hi there - you have a very nice voice! This was a really great recording to listen to! Just some issues as I mentioned previously that need to be corrected.

On tip, when correcting PL feedback it is easiest to work from the bottom to the top so that the time stamps that are provided stay the same. :)

File name should follow format on Page 1
Intro should follow format under the Magic Window (below grid) on Page 1
Please leave between .5 and 1 second of silence at the beginning
3:16 – please add “Footnote Harleian MS., 5910 End footnote”
4:08.5 – please add “Footnote Collection, from the French word recueillir, to gather End footnote”
7:19.5 – please add “Footnote” before Another word for sayings…
7:23.5 – please add “End Footnote” after …from the French dire, to say
10:26 Please change “6 score 8 days” to “6 shillings 8 pence”
10:30 6d Please change “6 days” to “6 pence”
16:52 – word dropped repeated – remove first one please
17:55 – please say End of Recording following format under Magic Window on Page 1.
Please leave 5 seconds of silence after you finish the End of Recording.

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Hi December Ink!

Very good reading of Chapter 37!

Just a couple of PL notes for you -

Start between .5 and 1 second please
3:37 – Please add “Footnote W. Roper End Footnote” (just copy from 3:53 – 3:57) as it is the same
17:26 – 17:30 – repeat of 17:30 – 17:33 – please delete 1st repeat.

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Hi Allan -

Here is your feedback on Section 43 -

Again, excellent reading with no mistakes and very pleasant to listen to! Just a couple of housekeeping issues to keep all the recordings the same -

1:19 – Please add “Footnote Charles Lamb End Footnote”
2:36 – Please remove “Charles Lamb”
4:17 – Please add “Footnote”
4:20.5 – Please add “End Footnote”
4:50 – Please add “Footnote Faery Queen, book VI, canto ii End Footnote”
5:23.5 – 5:27 – please remove Faery Queen, book VI, canto ii
6:01 – Please add “Footnote Swoon End Footnote”
6:19 – Please remove “Swoon”
11:20 – Please add “Footnote”
11:24 – Please add “End Footnote”

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Chapter 44

Hi there - another beautiful reading for this book! Just a couple of edits needed....

7:23 – Please add “Footnote” and then “End Footnote” around Coleridge
10:02 – Please add “Footnote” and then “End Footnote” around Prologue to the "Monk's Tale," Canterbury Tales
10:57 – Please add “Footnote” and then “End Footnote” around Sidney, Apologie for Poetrie
14:06.5 – Please add “Footnote” and then “End Footnote” around Sidney, Apologie for Poetrie, published 1595

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Hi Loveny (I hope I spelled that correctly)!

Great reading - I have some PL feedback for you - please let me know if you have any questions or want any help with how to do the fixes. Please do not re-record your Chapter - your recording is good - just a few things need to be fixed by copy/paste.

Chapter 62

0:27 – Title of Chapter is “Defoe – Robinson Crusoe” I only heard Robinson Crusoe.
0:33 – I heard “Defore” it should be “Defow” (that is how it is pronounced).
2:07 – I heard “arduous” it should be “hazardous”
2:17 – Please add “Footnote History of the Union of Great Britain End Footnote”
5:56 – Please add “Footnote Gates in the City Wall End Footnote”
9:16 – I heard “pilloid” it should be “pillor ED” (that is how it is pronounced)
9:26 – Please add “Footnote Johnathan Swift End Footnote”
10:07 – Bobble – remove the extra hum
10:21 – Please add “Footnote Samuel Johnson End Footnote”
10:28 – I heard “Quizote” it should be “KEYoTEH” (that is how it is pronounced)
11:24 – I believe “un” for the Uninhabited is repeated. Remove the 1st one please.
12:02 – I heard “his” it should be “this” which is crutial to understanding the sentence. Please re-record this part of the sentence as it is a bit broken up. “you will find that this feeling runs through them all. “
12:26 – Please add “Footnote William Minto End Footnote”
12:35 – heard “rouges” it should be “ROgges” (that is how it is pronounced)
12:46 – same as above
13:45 – I heard “fudgetive” it should be “FUGative” (that is how it is pronounced)
Please leave 5 seconds of silence at the end of the recording – you are about 1.5 seconds short.

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Hi MoleHill!

Well, you get today's price :clap:

Excellent reading of Chapter 71 WITH the Footnotes in with the readings! Wahoo! Only one little piece of feedback (which is quite funny actually) and then it will be PL OK!

Chapter 71

4:34 – 4:48 – repeat of footnote

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cadastra wrote: April 10th, 2021, 9:48 am
CadenB wrote: April 8th, 2021, 5:17 pm Here is my recording for section 32: About the Beginning of the Theater (13:19 long):

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/englishlitboysandgirls_32_marshall_128kb.mp3

Thank you!
CadenB
Hi, Caden! Great reading! The only PL note I have is related to how you read one of the abbreviations, "MS." We discussed this abbreviation when the project was first launched and the general consensus was that "MS" stands for "manuscript." Could you please say "manuscript" instead of "MS" at 09:40 and 10:21? Also, in the future, you don't have to say "this quotation may be found in..." when you come across a footnote. You can just say "footnote" and "end footnote." Thank you so much!
Hi Caden!

This recording is now PL OK! Awesome corrections - they are so seamless!

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Hi Aric!

Sections 74 and 78 are PL OK! Beautiful fixes - again seamless like you recorded them on the 1st pass!

Thanks so much for doing them.

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Kalamareader wrote: April 21st, 2021, 5:15 pm
Lynda,

Thank you so much for the kind words. :9:

Thanks for your hard work. I did my best, and I think I got all the corrections correct. :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/englishlitboysandgirls_16_marshall_128kb.mp3 9:10

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/englishlitboysandgirls_36_marshall_128kb.mp3 10:52

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/englishlitboysandgirls_73_marshall_128kb.mp3 11:47

And now that I know how to do it :clap: , might I please have Section 76?

Thanks,

Wayne
Hi Wayne - these Sections are now all PL OK!

Great corrections!

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Spring Teacher -

Section 39 is PL OK!

Awesome editing!

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Book Worm -

Sections 4 + 5 are PL OK! Thanks for those corrections!

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Ruth P

Section 59 is PL OK - thanks for fixing the silence!

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Section 43, Spencer - His Last Days, have be marked in Red, can't see what needs to be done in Post Reply as it does not seem to be there. Could you please tell me where it is in Post Reply, or what needs to be corrected?

Thanks

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nighthawks wrote: June 1st, 2021, 5:49 am Section 43, Spencer - His Last Days, have be marked in Red, can't see what needs to be done in Post Reply as it does not seem to be there. Could you please tell me where it is in Post Reply, or what needs to be corrected?

Thanks

:hmm:
Check 10 posts back?

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Post by Piotrek81 »

Lmnei wrote: May 31st, 2021, 12:50 pm Chapter 44

Hi there - another beautiful reading for this book! Just a couple of edits needed....

7:23 – Please add “Footnote” and then “End Footnote” around Coleridge
10:02 – Please add “Footnote” and then “End Footnote” around Prologue to the "Monk's Tale," Canterbury Tales
10:57 – Please add “Footnote” and then “End Footnote” around Sidney, Apologie for Poetrie
14:06.5 – Please add “Footnote” and then “End Footnote” around Sidney, Apologie for Poetrie, published 1595

Lynda
Thanks for the feedback. Do you mean something like [quoted fragment] "footnote" Coleridge "end footnote" and so on?
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