[GROUP] Harper's Young People, Vol. 1, Issue 24 - dl

Short Poetry Collections, Short Story Collections, and our Weekly Poetry Project
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Post by JorWat » December 14th, 2020, 7:05 am

PSHarvey106 wrote:
December 13th, 2020, 5:33 pm
Hi,

Thank you for catching that. :) Here is the corrected section. Thank you again for your hard work! :clap:

Section 2:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_02_various_128k.mp3
(Running Time 13:28)

Paul
PL OK. Though I will point out the file name is slightly off, missing the 'b' at the end (we can fix it, so no need to re-upload).
Jordan

Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.

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Post by LeeSalter » December 14th, 2020, 12:06 pm

I would like to take section 1, Nancy Hanson's Project.

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Post by jillebean » December 14th, 2020, 5:26 pm

LeeSalter wrote:
December 14th, 2020, 12:06 pm
I would like to take section 1, Nancy Hanson's Project.
Great! It's all yours. Thank you for claiming!

Jill

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Post by LeeSalter » December 17th, 2020, 3:16 pm

Here is my recording. Running time is 19:09. Lee Salter

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_1_hansonsproject_pyle_ls_128kb.mp3

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Post by jillebean » December 17th, 2020, 10:19 pm

LeeSalter wrote:
December 17th, 2020, 3:16 pm
Here is my recording. Running time is 19:09. Lee Salter

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_1_hansonsproject_pyle_ls_128kb.mp3
Thank you!

Jill

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Post by DHSKeyClub » December 19th, 2020, 4:00 pm

Hello,

Here is Section 4 (hoping I did this right):
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_4_various_128kb.mp3
Running Time: 12:40

Please let me know if there's anything I can improve on (or if I need to redo some part)

Thanks!
J

EDIT: Sorry, I forgot to include the footnote! I added it in just now.

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Post by jillebean » December 20th, 2020, 1:43 am

DHSKeyClub wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 4:00 pm
Hello,

Here is Section 4 (hoping I did this right):
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_4_various_128kb.mp3
Running Time: 12:40

Please let me know if there's anything I can improve on (or if I need to redo some part)

Thanks!
J

EDIT: Sorry, I forgot to include the footnote! I added it in just now.
Thank you! I've added it into the Magic Window and our proof listener Jordan will be along sometime soon to take a listen. Thanks again!

Jill

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Post by JorWat » December 20th, 2020, 10:25 am

LeeSalter wrote:
December 17th, 2020, 3:16 pm
Here is my recording. Running time is 19:09. Lee Salter

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_1_hansonsproject_pyle_ls_128kb.mp3
Here are your notes:

The file name is wrong. It should be hyp024_01_various_128kb
0:00: You need to read the intro as it's written in the first post. You never said the section number.
6:54: Missing the footnote after 'Smoke-House'
14:27: Missing the footnote after 'Newcastle'
14:57: "He was lying on the stern of the seat" should be "He was lying on the stern seat"
DHSKeyClub wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 4:00 pm
Hello,

Here is Section 4 (hoping I did this right):
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_4_various_128kb.mp3
Running Time: 12:40

Please let me know if there's anything I can improve on (or if I need to redo some part)

Thanks!
J

EDIT: Sorry, I forgot to include the footnote! I added it in just now.
PL OK.
Jordan

Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.

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Post by jillebean » December 20th, 2020, 12:47 pm

Thank you Jordan!

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Post by LeeSalter » December 20th, 2020, 1:04 pm

I have uploaded the corrected file. Running time: 19:36

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_01_various_128kb.mp3

Hopefully everything is now correct. I hope that at some point down the line I will submit a project that doesn't need any correction.

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Post by jillebean » December 20th, 2020, 4:53 pm

LeeSalter wrote:
December 20th, 2020, 1:04 pm
I have uploaded the corrected file. Running time: 19:36

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_01_various_128kb.mp3

Hopefully everything is now correct. I hope that at some point down the line I will submit a project that doesn't need any correction.
It takes time to get a handle on all the details of Librivox recording. Be patient with yourself, the first sections you turn in are the most challenging. It does get easier! And we're all here to help each other out. Thanks for your quick corrections. I'll mark it in the Magic Window for Jordan to take another listen. Thanks again!

Jill

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Post by JorWat » December 21st, 2020, 6:56 am

LeeSalter wrote:
December 20th, 2020, 1:04 pm
I have uploaded the corrected file. Running time: 19:36

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/hyp024_01_various_128kb.mp3

Hopefully everything is now correct. I hope that at some point down the line I will submit a project that doesn't need any correction.
PL OK!
Jordan

Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.

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Post by BettyB » December 23rd, 2020, 9:08 pm

Last edited by BettyB on December 23rd, 2020, 9:08 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by jillebean » December 24th, 2020, 4:04 am

Thank you Betty!

Jill :)

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Post by JorWat » December 27th, 2020, 10:33 am

9 is PL OK.

For 8, at 6:28, the audio during "and there are two pretty little blue eggs in it" seems to be distorted.
Jordan

Alcohol and Maths don't mix. So never drink and derive.

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