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Post by adrianstephens » November 3rd, 2020, 8:34 am

Hello TriciaG, would you please give me the next 10 opens. Thanks, Adrian
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Post by aradlaw » November 3rd, 2020, 8:41 am

Hi Tricia, I can tackle sections 92, 93. Thanks.
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Post by TriciaG » November 3rd, 2020, 8:47 am

Adrian is in for 10 Psalms, David is in for 92 and 93 Psalms. :lol:

Thanks, both!
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Post by aradlaw » November 3rd, 2020, 1:12 pm

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Post by TriciaG » November 3rd, 2020, 2:06 pm

Thanks! A few notes (many are bad rendering of the typeface):

Psalm 92:

1:07 - "In fain to wrack past help doe passe" - I hear "doe pass" (like "doe, a deer"). But this is "past help DO pass". :)

1:20 - "all wicked hands to ruine fall" - I hear "to mine fall"

1:26 - "Will lively lift my horne" - I hear "home"

1:33 - "my spies in spiteful ease" - I hear "case"

Psalm 93:

0:35 - "He who endles one remaines" - I bet this is "endless" (as in, "he who remains for all time, one".)
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Post by aradlaw » November 3rd, 2020, 3:52 pm

Thanks Tricia, yeah, I go with the typeface, take two...
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/psalmesofdavid_092_sidney_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/psalmesofdavid_093_sidney_128kb.mp3

(same times)

*altho I did use the text copy and corrected the obvious bad OCRs :roll:
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Post by TriciaG » November 3rd, 2020, 6:58 pm

PL OK!

I actually listened to the words on part of it this time: "My eyes shall spy my spies in spiteful ease" - love the wording here!
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Post by adrianstephens » November 4th, 2020, 2:39 am

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Post by TriciaG » November 4th, 2020, 8:37 am

Psalm 50:
2:11-2:13- longish pause. What do you think - worth shortening?

Psalm 55:
4:13 - "with bearing pain'd and pin'd" - could this be "pined" rather than "pinned"? It fits the rhyme.
4:39 - "thread so weakly twin'd" - I think this is "twined" rather than "twinned", and makes sense (a thread can be twined).
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Post by adrianstephens » November 5th, 2020, 1:06 am

TriciaG wrote:
November 4th, 2020, 8:37 am
Psalm 50:
2:11-2:13- longish pause. What do you think - worth shortening?

Psalm 55:
4:13 - "with bearing pain'd and pin'd" - could this be "pined" rather than "pinned"? It fits the rhyme.
4:39 - "thread so weakly twin'd" - I think this is "twined" rather than "twinned", and makes sense (a thread can be twined).
The corrected ones:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/psalmesofdavid_055_sidney_128kb.mp3

And those with some excitingly new misteaks for you to find:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/psalmesofdavid_056_sidney_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/psalmesofdavid_057_sidney_128kb.mp3
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Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM

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Post by TriciaG » November 5th, 2020, 8:12 am

Thanks! 50 and 55 PL OK.

Psalm 56:
2:26 - "Ah, I can no payment make" - I hear "take"
2:32 - "The vows I pay, thy praises I resound" - missing "Thy praises I resound" (next line starts with "Thy praises" so you probably accidentally cut the last phrase)

Psalm 57:
1:31 - "So, Lord, O serve them so" - I hear "I serve them so"

It's much easier to listen and find the mistakes than it is to record them. I'm glad I'm just listening and not recording! :lol:
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Post by adrianstephens » November 5th, 2020, 10:58 am

TriciaG wrote:
November 5th, 2020, 8:12 am
Thanks! 50 and 55 PL OK.

Psalm 56:
2:26 - "Ah, I can no payment make" - I hear "take"
2:32 - "The vows I pay, thy praises I resound" - missing "Thy praises I resound" (next line starts with "Thy praises" so you probably accidentally cut the last phrase)

Psalm 57:
1:31 - "So, Lord, O serve them so" - I hear "I serve them so"

It's much easier to listen and find the mistakes than it is to record them. I'm glad I'm just listening and not recording! :lol:
Hello Tricia,
Here we are: https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/psalmesofdavid_056_sidney_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/psalmesofdavid_057_sidney_128kb.mp3

And now to cook up my next batch of infelicities.
Best,
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Post by TriciaG » November 5th, 2020, 12:53 pm

Spot PL OK - thanks!
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Post by TriciaG » November 6th, 2020, 11:04 am

Psalm 58
PL OK

Psalm 59
2:52 - "let them all being quite forgoe" - I hear "let them all being seeing quite.."

Psalm 61
PL OK

Psalm 62
PL OK
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