COMPLETE [TRIO] Harmonium by Wallace Stevens - dl

[KevinS]

Sticking my fingers in where they shouldn't be - if you don't come up with anything better "Harmonium 1" Harmonium 2" etc sounds nicer than section 1 or part 1 (to my ears) - anne

That might work!

[bluechien]

Can we put something in the title section of the MW, and/or add the link to the Google doc, so Helen has one or two reference points about what goes in each section? Plus, I think David will need something in there to catalog?

[KevinS]

Can we put something in the title section of the MW, and/or add the link to the Google doc, so Helen has one or two reference points about what goes in each section? Plus, I think David will need something in there to catalog?

I'll send a copy of the section breakdown to Helen by PM. Nemo would have to send the link, I believe.

[bluechien]

Helen, if this helps, this is the breakdown of sections and readers:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SVQJ_GiAZfRYyP0trE8M7hCvHlffoPW2ju63lp_Qet0/
(even though it says Possible it is really closer to Categorical )

[aradlaw]

Is this something you can work with? I think we have really worked out all the nitty details, more or less.

Yes, looking at it that way it makes sense.

Sticking my fingers in where they shouldn't be - if you don't come up with anything better "Harmonium 1" Harmonium 2" etc sounds nicer than section 1 or part 1 (to my ears) - anne

Partially right, I think the titles in the Magic Window should match the intros being read, IE: Kevin reads "Section 1 of Harmonium, etc..".
As one of your sample project's MW reads 'Selected Poems of George Herbert, Section 1'; is 'Harmonium by Wallace Stevens, Section 1' possible?

**Almost forgot, I will move this over to Short Works.

[bluechien]

Is this something you can work with? I think we have really worked out all the nitty details, more or less.

Yes, looking at it that way it makes sense.

Sticking my fingers in where they shouldn't be - if you don't come up with anything better "Harmonium 1" Harmonium 2" etc sounds nicer than section 1 or part 1 (to my ears) - anne

Partially right, I think the titles in the Magic Window should match the intros being read, IE: Kevin reads "Section 1 of Harmonium, etc..".
As one of your sample project's MW reads 'Selected Poems of George Herbert, Section 1'; is 'Harmonium by Wallace Stevens, Section 1' possible?

**Almost forgot, I will move this over to Short Works.

Thank you, David! I think this makes a lot of sense. Would it be okay if we leave our placeholders for now in the Title section of the MW and update it to match as you describe shortly before we catalog? This way we have a second way to keep track between three people. (I'm the one who reads out of my section, usually. )

[aradlaw]

Excellent idea Eva, keep in mind that whatever is in the MW as section titles will be the final title(s) when cataloged.

[HZFerr]

TY Kevin for the section by reader breakdown (in color).
I always enjoy working from the original book form.

sect 1 & 4
PL OK

sect 9
PL notes: slight editing
Please check I hear a word repeated.

1:20 burned alone in in an immense valley (pg74)

[bluechien]

Excellent idea Eva, keep in mind that whatever is in the MW as section titles will be the final title(s) when cataloged.

Duly noted!

[NemoR]

Section 2 ready for PL at 6:05 length....

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/harmonium_02_stevens_128kb.mp3

Eva found a couple wonderful books written by Helen Vendler - .literary critic and professor at Harvard - critiquing Stevens poems.... they are soooo good and really helped to give the feel for them.

[NemoR]

Section 6 is also ready for PL at 5:38 length ...

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/harmonium_06_stevens_128kb.mp3


Kevin, just a reminder that section 2 still needs to be put in the MW for PL'ing

[KevinS]

Thank you. (I'm back now. Out of action for a bit.)

[HZFerr]

Welcome back Kevin.

[HZFerr]

sect 2 & 6
PL OK

[NemoR]

sect 2 & 6
PL OK

Thank you Helen!