[Fortnightly Poem] The Indian Seranade, by Percy Bysshe Shelley - dl

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Post by msfry » September 10th, 2019, 8:03 am

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Eva, Nemo, Pete, all PL OK. Thanks

Chad,
:37 As I must die on thine, you say thee. Seems significant enough to mention.
Strange audio quality, like recording underwater. No need to re-do for this group poetry project, just not up to your usual clarity. I'm curious what has changed?
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Post by KevinS » September 10th, 2019, 8:22 am

msfry wrote:
September 10th, 2019, 7:28 am
Okay, here's my attempt. Sometimes the more I look into things, the less sense it makes. :shock:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/indianseranade_shelley_mtf_128kb.mp3 1:25
PL OK.

I hope to do my rendition soon.
E agora, José?

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Post by KevinS » September 10th, 2019, 4:58 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/indianseranade_shelley_ks_128kb.mp3

1:18

This poem is such a lovely choice. It's one that could be---and is---used in classroom discussion. The lovers' genders are uncertain, the setting is uncertain, even the action is uncertain. Still the poem resonates, perhaps because of its ambiguity. Who hasn't felt these strong emotions?
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Post by Horner94 » September 10th, 2019, 5:59 pm

msfry wrote:
September 10th, 2019, 8:03 am
PL Notes:

Eva, Nemo, Pete, all PL OK. Thanks

Chad,
:37 As I must die on thine, you say thee. Seems significant enough to mention.
Strange audio quality, like recording underwater. No need to re-do for this group poetry project, just not up to your usual clarity. I'm curious what has changed?
Hi!
Thanks for the feedback :D
I'll make the amendments
Kind regards,
Chad

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Post by Horner94 » September 10th, 2019, 6:10 pm

Hello!
Sorry for the audio quality. I decided to re-do it again, I was not pleased with the quality at all upon listening to it again.
Here is my recording: https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/indianseranade_shelley_cjph_128kb.mp3 Time: 01:06
Kind regards,
Chad

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Post by msfry » September 10th, 2019, 7:30 pm

KevinS wrote:
September 10th, 2019, 4:58 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/indianseranade_shelley_ks_128kb.mp3

1:18

This poem is such a lovely choice. It's one that could be---and is---used in classroom discussion. The lovers' genders are uncertain, the setting is uncertain, even the action is uncertain. Still the poem resonates, perhaps because of its ambiguity. Who hasn't felt these strong emotions?
Thanks, Kevin. Your rendition is PL OK. I agree, this poem is ambiguous yet it resonates! Is it a dream sequence? A day dream? A real occurrence? Happy. Sad. Both. I didn't know it was taught in school.
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Post by msfry » September 10th, 2019, 7:31 pm

Horner94 wrote:
September 10th, 2019, 6:10 pm
Hello!
Sorry for the audio quality. I decided to re-do it again, I was not pleased with the quality at all upon listening to it again.
Here is my recording: https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/indianseranade_shelley_cjph_128kb.mp3 Time: 01:06
Kind regards,
Chad
Considerably better audio quality! PL OK. :D
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Post by msfry » September 11th, 2019, 8:15 am

Thanks, Graham and Bruce. PL OK
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Post by aradlaw » September 11th, 2019, 6:09 pm

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Post by williamjones » September 11th, 2019, 7:18 pm

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Post by msfry » September 11th, 2019, 7:22 pm

Please upload again with your initials. :lol: :lol:
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Post by williamjones » September 11th, 2019, 7:46 pm

msfry wrote:
September 11th, 2019, 7:22 pm
Please upload again with your initials. :lol: :lol:
Here it is:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/indianseranade_shelley_wj_128kb.mp3 1:31
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