Have PL'd all these now Lola.Pinklady77 wrote: ↑September 5th, 2019, 11:55 amHello!
Have my sections ready.
section 16; duration 2:36
section17; duration 3:11
section 18; duration 2:56
section 19; duration 2:8
section 20; duration 2:49
- a slightly jarring mid-phrase halt please around 30s 'shut up...her young kid'
-around 48 the word 'cheat' is not clear - only half audible
- at the end, should be 'end of SECTION (not chapter) 16' (not chapter) - you have done this on 16-19 (but not 20!), saying Section at the beginning, but Chapter at the end. I will leave it up to you whether to correct 17-19, and perhaps you could focus on saying end of SECTION for the rest?
Thanks for reading.