[CHILDREN] Little Jack Rabbit and Chippy Chipmunk by David Cory - dlo

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Post by KevinS » August 9th, 2019, 10:56 am

E agora, José?

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Post by silverquill » August 9th, 2019, 1:24 pm

In the MW Ready for PL

(Thanks, Rosebud!) :)

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Post by RSlabaugh » August 9th, 2019, 8:03 pm

PL note: 17 seconds of silence at end (might want to double check that :wink:)
Otherwise it's good!
~Rosebud

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Post by KevinS » August 9th, 2019, 8:07 pm

RSlabaugh wrote:
August 9th, 2019, 8:03 pm
PL note: 17 seconds of silence at end (might want to double check that :wink:)
Otherwise it's good!
Wow!

Fixed now.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/jackandchippy_09_cory_128kb.mp3

3:18
E agora, José?

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Post by RSlabaugh » August 9th, 2019, 8:25 pm

Who updates the time in the notes section? The file is correct, but the time still says 3:31. I'm going to mark it PL OK but leave the time for whoever is responsible for that.
~Rosebud

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Post by KevinS » August 9th, 2019, 8:38 pm

RSlabaugh wrote:
August 9th, 2019, 8:25 pm
Who updates the time in the notes section? The file is correct, but the time still says 3:31. I'm going to mark it PL OK but leave the time for whoever is responsible for that.
I don't know, to tell the truth. (Haven't I been helpful in all of this? Haha.)

I would change the time as a DPL, but that's speaking for myself.
E agora, José?

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Post by RSlabaugh » August 9th, 2019, 8:42 pm

KevinS wrote:
August 9th, 2019, 8:38 pm
RSlabaugh wrote:
August 9th, 2019, 8:25 pm
Who updates the time in the notes section? The file is correct, but the time still says 3:31. I'm going to mark it PL OK but leave the time for whoever is responsible for that.
I don't know, to tell the truth. (Haven't I been helpful in all of this? Haha.)

I would change the time as a DPL, but that's speaking for myself.
OK, will do! :D
~Rosebud

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Post by silverquill » August 9th, 2019, 9:33 pm

RSlabaugh wrote:
August 9th, 2019, 8:25 pm
Who updates the time in the notes section? The file is correct, but the time still says 3:31. I'm going to mark it PL OK but leave the time for whoever is responsible for that.
Yep, it is fine for you to do this if you get to it first.

Sent you a PM with some other comments.

Thanks so much for your good DPL work. :9:

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Post by Pinklady77 » August 10th, 2019, 5:20 pm

Hello everyone,

Here is Chapter 29 Duration 3:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/jackandchippy_29_cory_128kb.mp3

Lola Janie

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Post by silverquill » August 10th, 2019, 8:49 pm

Pinklady77 wrote:
August 10th, 2019, 5:20 pm
Hello everyone,

Here is Chapter 29 Duration 3:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/jackandchippy_29_cory_128kb.mp3

Lola Janie
Thank you, Lola!

I usually like to take a listen when we have new readers, and since this was a short section, I did a full PL.

First, let me tell you that this is very nicely read! I'm looking forward to having some more chapters from you for this little book. :clap:

Just a couple of tiny issue that need attention.

First, the ending silence needs to be close to five seconds and you have only three. While you're at it, you might trim a bit from the front end where we need only one second or less and you have just a tad over that.

Although you background noise is within acceptable limits, you could greatly improve the sound of your recording just be running some basic noise reduction which is easy to do in Audacity. So, that's just a tip. :)

If you need help with any of this, just let me know.

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Post by RSlabaugh » August 11th, 2019, 12:15 pm

silverquill wrote:
August 10th, 2019, 8:49 pm

I usually like to take a listen when we have new readers, and since this was a short section, I did a full PL.
Thanks, Larry! I'm happy to have input, and it helps me better understand what level of perfection to expect :)
~Rosebud

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Post by Jbholland77 » August 11th, 2019, 3:20 pm

Hi! Could I have chapters 7 & 8, please?

Thank you!
Elisabeth

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Post by silverquill » August 11th, 2019, 5:11 pm

Jbholland77 wrote:
August 11th, 2019, 3:20 pm
Hi! Could I have chapters 7 & 8, please?

Thank you!
Elisabeth
Thank you!
These are yours.

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Post by Pinklady77 » August 12th, 2019, 8:12 am

Thank you for the feedback. I am going to make the changes and repost

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Post by Pinklady77 » August 12th, 2019, 9:12 am

Good Afternoon,

Here are my corrected recordings.
Chapter 4, duration: 3:18
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/jackandchippy_04_cory_128kb.mp3

Chapter 28, duration: 2:28
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/jackandcippy_28_cory_128kb.mp3

Chapter 29, duration: 3:31- made noise reduction and amplified sound. Also, cut off time in front and added a few seconds to the end of the recording.
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/jackandchippy_29_cory_128kb.mp3

Thank you for your help.
Lola Janie

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