[SHORT STORIES] Stories and Pictures by I. L. Peretz; translated by Helena Frank (1872-1954 - mas

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 16th, 2019, 8:28 am

Sections 10 and 23 PL OK :thumbs:

Section 15 @0:22 I think you accidentally said “L L Peretz” instead of “I L Peretz” :)

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 16th, 2019, 11:13 am

Sections 27-29 PL OK :thumbs:

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Post by adr6090 » July 16th, 2019, 11:53 am

elsieselwyn wrote:
July 16th, 2019, 8:28 am
Sections 10 and 23 PL OK :thumbs:

Section 15 @0:22 I think you accidentally said “L L Peretz” instead of “I L Peretz” :)
oops. :oops:
I will get that fixed & thank you for the pl okay for section 20-23 :)
April

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 16th, 2019, 4:35 pm

adr6090 wrote:
July 16th, 2019, 11:53 am
elsieselwyn wrote:
July 16th, 2019, 8:28 am
Sections 10 and 23 PL OK :thumbs:

Section 15 @0:22 I think you accidentally said “L L Peretz” instead of “I L Peretz” :)
oops. :oops:
I will get that fixed & thank you for the pl okay for section 20-23 :)
April
I think 15 is for Lmnei so you don’t have to worry about it! :D

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 17th, 2019, 10:13 am

Lynda,

Sections 34-36 and 40 are PL OK :thumbs:

PL Notes:

Section 41: awkward pause @9:35 awkward pause

Section 43:
@2:53 stumble "with humble pride"
@7:11 repeat

Section 44:@9:59: repeat "but the fish says that the other fish"

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 17th, 2019, 10:41 am

April,

Sections 38, 39, 42, 45, 62 PL OK :thumbs:



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Post by elsieselwyn » July 19th, 2019, 7:19 pm

Sections 15, 41, 43, and 44 PL OK :thumbs:

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Post by BurgundyGrace » July 21st, 2019, 3:45 pm

The Woman Mistress Hannah: A Packet of Letters: First Letter
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/storiesandpictures_46_peretz_128kb.mp3 [11:19]

Thanks for listening.
Readers Encouraged for:

The Book of Saints and Friendly Beasts (with short sections.)
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Khaled, A Tale of Arabia
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~Angelique

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Post by BurgundyGrace » July 21st, 2019, 5:01 pm

Readers Encouraged for:

The Book of Saints and Friendly Beasts (with short sections.)
viewtopic.php?t=74604

Khaled, A Tale of Arabia
viewtopic.php?f=26&t=72371
~Angelique

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 21st, 2019, 5:53 pm

Thank you, Angelique!

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Post by BurgundyGrace » July 21st, 2019, 6:22 pm

In the Pond:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/storiesandpictures_56_peretz_128kb.mp3 [5:55]

Thank YOU, Elsie.
Please take your time with these; I'll likely do all corrections at once, or 5 or 6 at once, so there's no rush for you to get to them.
I hope you are having a great vacation!
Readers Encouraged for:

The Book of Saints and Friendly Beasts (with short sections.)
viewtopic.php?t=74604

Khaled, A Tale of Arabia
viewtopic.php?f=26&t=72371
~Angelique

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Post by BurgundyGrace » July 23rd, 2019, 7:45 pm

Readers Encouraged for:

The Book of Saints and Friendly Beasts (with short sections.)
viewtopic.php?t=74604

Khaled, A Tale of Arabia
viewtopic.php?f=26&t=72371
~Angelique


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