[Christianity] Love Slaves, SL Brengle - dlo

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » June 10th, 2019, 2:23 am

Thanks Patty! Chapter 15 is yours!

brucek · Post by **brucek** » June 13th, 2019, 7:13 am

Here's Section 12 at 13:06

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_12_brengle_128kb.mp3

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Bruce.

brucek · Post by **brucek** » June 13th, 2019, 7:14 am

And I would like to claim sections 7 and 8.

Thanks,
Bruce.

Horner94 · Post by **Horner94** » June 13th, 2019, 7:42 am

May I claim Section 3?
Kind regards,
Chad

pattymarie · Post by **pattymarie** » June 13th, 2019, 7:43 am

Section 12 is PL OK. Thank you, Bruce. I'm sure Beth will be along soon to approve your new claims.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » June 13th, 2019, 4:40 pm

Thanks Bruce and Chad - all those claims are accepted and in the MW!

Post by **dlolso21** » June 13th, 2019, 5:16 pm

I would like to claim section 2.

David O

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » June 13th, 2019, 6:14 pm

Thanks David! Love to have you!

Horner94 · Post by **Horner94** » June 15th, 2019, 6:16 pm

Hello,
Here is Section 3 ready for PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_03_brengle_128kb.mp3 Time: 27:16
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » June 15th, 2019, 6:38 pm

Section 18, please.

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » June 15th, 2019, 8:19 pm

Hi Kevin, that’s fine, I’ll put you in for Chapter 18, but please don’t forget you also have a chapter due soon in my “History of Byzantium” project!

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » June 16th, 2019, 4:44 am

Elizabby wrote: ↑June 15th, 2019, 8:19 pm [P]lease don’t forget you also have a chapter due soon in my “History of Byzantium” project!

How could I forget?! Hahah! All those names!

I'll get crackin', I promise.

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » June 16th, 2019, 4:49 am

Section 18

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_18_brengle_128kb.mp3

10:35

Horner94 · Post by **Horner94** » June 16th, 2019, 7:22 am

Can I please claim Section 16 as well?
Kind regards,
Chad

pattymarie · Post by **pattymarie** » June 16th, 2019, 1:10 pm

Horner94 wrote: ↑June 15th, 2019, 6:16 pm Hello,
Here is Section 3 ready for PL: https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/loveslaves_T03_brengle_128kb.mp3 Time: 27:16
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Kind regards,
Chad

The technical improvement here is wonderful (I didn't notice any harsh sibilants), Chad, but I think you forgot to edit it before uploading. In a listen to the whole file on my portable player, I heard a large number of mistakes. Listening at the computer to find the locations yielded eight repetitions or false starts followed by corrections with the false start left in place in the first six minutes, and I didn't count all of the several hesitating pauses that are no more than a second but which break up the rhythm and are disconcerting to comprehension. I remember it continuing pretty much the same throughout though there's some improvement further along. Would you mind editing and re-uploading the file.:

Here are the locations of the reps and left-in false starts in the first six minutes:

1:45 under/uttered

1:56-57 memory/memory

2:10-11 penitent/penitent

2:26-27 holiest/holiest

2:59 in/in

3:39-3:43 a theory often advances/ a theory is often advanced

4:40-4:43 and such a seeing/ and such a seeming

5:43-47 and that this punishment they are conscious/ and that of this punishment...

I noted the locations of two of the hesitations: 1:37 and 2:36-37 but there are others. Technically they aren't long enough to require removal, but their absence would ease listeners' comprehension. I remember a longer one of about two seconds between an adjective and its noun further on.