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Post by spatel2 » October 23rd, 2020, 8:30 am

alanmapstone wrote:
October 22nd, 2020, 11:13 pm
Section 75 revised

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_75_symons_128kb.mp3
1:31

Just realised that I forgot to include the End of Book message which I should have done as this is the final section. It should be there now :D
I’m so sorry that I didn’t catch that. Looks like you’d make a much better DPL than me. Since you caught that, it’s PL OK. I can mark it unless Carolin already did. Thanks and sorry!
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Post by alanmapstone » October 23rd, 2020, 8:48 am

spatel2 wrote:
October 23rd, 2020, 8:30 am
alanmapstone wrote:
October 22nd, 2020, 11:13 pm
Section 75 revised
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_75_symons_128kb.mp3
1:31
Just realised that I forgot to include the End of Book message which I should have done as this is the final section. It should be there now :D
I’m so sorry that I didn’t catch that. Looks like you’d make a much better DPL than me. Since you caught that, it’s PL OK. I can mark it unless Carolin already did. Thanks and sorry!
Don't worry about it. You are doing OK :thumbs:
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Post by spatel2 » October 23rd, 2020, 9:10 am

Section 38 PL OK!
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Post by spatel2 » October 23rd, 2020, 9:13 am

61 PL OK...wonderful French pronounciations!!

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62 PL OK!
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Post by bletheringape » October 23rd, 2020, 10:35 am

spatel2 wrote:
October 23rd, 2020, 9:13 am
61 PL OK...wonderful French pronounciations!!

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62 PL OK!
Thank you, Shriya! Glad to know that my twelve years of French classes weren't totally in vain :)
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Post by brucek » October 24th, 2020, 7:44 am

Here's Section 15 at 1:33
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_15_symons_128kb.mp3

Section 17 at 1:39
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_17_symons_128kb.mp3

Section 19 at 1:22
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_19_symons_128kb.mp3

Section 21 at 1:41
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_21_symons_128kb.mp3

Section 22 at 1:02
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_22_symons_128kb.mp3

and Section 24 at 1:21
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_24_symons_128kb.mp3

Errata:

In Section 19, Verse 4, Line 3, I read "women's checks are white" as "women's cheeks are white" to match that found in the original book.

In Section 24, Verse 1, Line 2, I read "leaves an ashen" as "leaves an ashen path" to match that found in the original book.

~~~~~
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Post by pschempf » October 24th, 2020, 9:13 am

brucek wrote:
October 24th, 2020, 7:44 am
....
Errata:

In Section 19, Verse 4, Line 3, I read "women's checks are white" as "women's cheeks are white" to match that found in the original book.

In Section 24, Verse 1, Line 2, I read "leaves an ashen" as "leaves an ashen path" to match that found in the original book.

~~~~~
Bruce.
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Post by Carolin » October 24th, 2020, 9:44 am

thank you all! :D
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Post by Carolin » October 24th, 2020, 9:46 am

thank you bruce for taking the time to look at the scan :thumbs:
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Post by spatel2 » October 24th, 2020, 11:11 am

15 PL OK
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Post by spatel2 » October 24th, 2020, 11:13 am

17 PL OK
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Post by spatel2 » October 24th, 2020, 11:16 am

Section 19 -

The text reads:
We smoke, to fancy that we dream,
And drink, a moment's joy to prove,
And fain would love, and only seem
To love because we cannot love.
You forgot to add the "to love." Please tell me if you want to mark it PL OK, I'm marking it See PL Notes for now.
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Post by spatel2 » October 24th, 2020, 11:19 am

21 PL OK
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Post by spatel2 » October 24th, 2020, 11:21 am

22 PL OK, 24 PL OK
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Post by Carolin » October 25th, 2020, 6:06 am

Thank you Shriya!
spatel2 wrote:
October 24th, 2020, 11:16 am
Section 19 -

The text reads:
We smoke, to fancy that we dream,
And drink, a moment's joy to prove,
And fain would love, and only seem
To love because we cannot love.
You forgot to add the "to love." Please tell me if you want to mark it PL OK, I'm marking it See PL Notes for now.
This id say has to be fixed. The line doesnt make sense otherwise :) thank you for noting it :)
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