COMPLETE Stories without Tears by Barry Pain -ck

[adr6090]

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_26_pain_128kb.mp3 time 7:43
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_33_pain_128kb.mp3 time 6:11
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_37_pain_128kb.mp3 time 5:40

Hello,
Here are my three.

Hi there! Here is the PL feedback on the Sections above -

Section 26 -
6:37 – heard “but no one saw it” should be “but no eye saw it”

Section 33 -
5:38 – repeat “That it is quite true”
Also at 5:38 there is quite a jump in the sound - perhaps work on reducing the volume for the piece you pasted into the recording.

Section 37 -
PL OK!

Lynda

storieswithouttears_26_pain_128kb.mp3 time 7:43
storieswithouttears_33_pain_128kb.mp3 time 6:90

Hello Lynda,
Here are the two sections with your edits applied.
Thanks for the pl okay as well for section 37

[Carolin]

Thank you both

[livh]

Just uploaded mine: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_13_pain_128kb.mp3 time: 9:19

I hope its ok! Thank you

[Lmnei]

Hi Carolin,

I've uploaded 7:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_#7#_pain_128kb.mp3 8:48

Hi rpotenza

I need you to save your file again exactly how it is shown below the area where it instructs you how to record the Chapter. The # signs are not to be in the file and it is preventing me from Proof Listening to your recording. Note the first part through to the /carolin/ is added when you upload. Your file when you save it should be as follows -

storieswithouttears_07_pain_128kb.mp3

Lynda

[Lmnei]

Just uploaded mine: https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_13_pain_128kb.mp3 time: 9:19

I hope its ok! Thank you

Hi Liv!

That was an AWESOME reading! I loved all the different voices you used!

Just 2 little changes needed -

:32 heard “a particularly” should just be “particularly”
4:48 heard “would” should be “should”

Lynda

[Lmnei]

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storieswithouttears_26_pain_128kb.mp3 time 7:43
storieswithouttears_33_pain_128kb.mp3 time 6:90

Hello Lynda,
Here are the two sections with your edits applied.
Thanks for the pl okay as well for section 37
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Hi there - Section 26 still says "No one Saw it" instead of "No eye saw it"
And Section 33 still has the same repeat and sound issue.

Can you please re-upload your files again?

This time please post the full link to the files like you did the first time.

Lynda

[rpotenza]

Hi Lynda,

As kindly instructed

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_07_pain_128kb.mp3 time: 8:48

has been saved.

[Lmnei]

Hi Lynda,

As kindly instructed

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_07_pain_128kb.mp3 time: 8:48

has been saved.

Great! I will listen to it shortly.

Lynda

[Foon]

Here's one from me:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_41_pain_128kb.mp3 3:59

[Gab1]

Hi Carolin,

Can I claim the section 2?
It will be my first recording, so you can use "Gab1" as my username

[Lmnei]

Hi Lynda,

As kindly instructed

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_07_pain_128kb.mp3 time: 8:48

has been saved.

Hi there!

Here is your feedback on Section 7

:32 – Heard “she firmly believed” should be “she firmly held”
:55 – extra word – “as” which is easy to delete.

For me personally, your might try reading a bit more slowly and put some small pauses between paragraphs and/or sections like was in this Chapter. It would do the Chapter and book more justice as then the listener will be able to hear all the words spoken as sometimes they run into each other with the speed in which you speak. Many times I had to go back and re-listen to the recording to make sure I heard what was written. That said, you are a very good reader!

Please make the edits and re-upload the file and let us know of the URL and the recording time again.

Lynda

[BurgundyGrace]

May I be assigned: 10, Chrisimissima?

[BurgundyGrace]

Also, I'd like to record XV: The Key of the Hen-House.

Thanks!

[rpotenza]

Hi Lynda,

As kindly instructed

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_07_pain_128kb.mp3 time: 8:48

has been saved.

Hi there!

Here is your feedback on Section 7

:32 – Heard “she firmly believed” should be “she firmly held”
:55 – extra word – “as” which is easy to delete.

For me personally, your might try reading a bit more slowly and put some small pauses between paragraphs and/or sections like was in this Chapter. It would do the Chapter and book more justice as then the listener will be able to hear all the words spoken as sometimes they run into each other with the speed in which you speak. Many times I had to go back and re-listen to the recording to make sure I heard what was written. That said, you are a very good reader!

Please make the edits and re-upload the file and let us know of the URL and the recording time again.

Lynda

Hi Lynda,

Thank you for your comments and directions. I have made the edits and re-uploaded Section 7 as follows-

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/storieswithouttears_07_pain_128kb.mp3 time: 9:10

Rick

[GregGiordano]

May I claim Sections 6 and 11?

Thanks!

Greg