[Fairy Tales-FULL] Swanhilde, and other Fairy Tales, by Wilhelm Hauff-mas

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Post by Pixxol » July 11th, 2018, 4:35 pm

Foon wrote:
July 11th, 2018, 7:20 am
Pixxol,

Section 9 is beautifully read! :clap: (Sorry that PL took a while!) I have two comments:

12:15 I hear "devoid to battle and the chase", the text reads "devoted to battle and the chase"
14:27-end: Looks like you have re-recorded some phrases for editing at the end of the story. (I think they all sound excellent :D) Could you cut those down to 1 version? ;)
Omg I didnt realize I did that!! Ok as soon as we get back from our wedding, I'll send you the new edit! :)
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Post by Foon » July 21st, 2018, 1:08 am

Thank you!! You're in for PL :)
Foon - Please correct my pronunciation!

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Post by Foon » July 23rd, 2018, 7:11 am

Beautifully read! You have a very warm but calm voice and it's a pleasure to listen to :clap:

I have 1 PL note;
At 5:33 there is a repeat “But alas, before the seven sleepers awoke” - should be a quick snip.


I look forward to part 2 of the story! :9:
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Post by thestorygirl » July 23rd, 2018, 5:37 pm

Thanks! Will get to fixing it shortly.
Thanks for listening!

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Post by thestorygirl » July 25th, 2018, 12:38 pm


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Post by Foon » July 25th, 2018, 2:20 pm

thestorygirl wrote:
July 25th, 2018, 12:38 pm
Fixed Section 01: (44:56)

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/swanhilde_01_hauff_128kb.mp3
Thank you! You're in for spot PL :)
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Post by thestorygirl » July 25th, 2018, 3:10 pm

Secion 02! (27:49)

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/swanhilde_02_hauff_128kb.mp3

Stockholm Syndrome, anyone? :shock:

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Post by Foon » July 26th, 2018, 12:08 am

thestorygirl wrote:
July 25th, 2018, 3:10 pm
Secion 02! (27:49)

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/swanhilde_02_hauff_128kb.mp3

Stockholm Syndrome, anyone? :shock:
Thank you! You're in for PL :)
I look forward to hearing how the story continues!
Foon - Please correct my pronunciation!

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Post by Foon » July 26th, 2018, 5:22 am

thestorygirl wrote:
July 25th, 2018, 12:38 pm
Fixed Section 01: (44:56)

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/swanhilde_01_hauff_128kb.mp3
Spot PL OK! :thumbs: :clap:
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Post by Foon » July 26th, 2018, 5:53 am

thestorygirl wrote:
July 25th, 2018, 3:10 pm
Secion 02! (27:49)

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/swanhilde_02_hauff_128kb.mp3

Stockholm Syndrome, anyone? :shock:
Oh dang, yes, it's a beautiful example of Stockholm syndrome indeed! :shock:

Section 2 is PL OK, excellently read again :thumbs:
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Post by thestorygirl » July 26th, 2018, 10:34 am

Great! Thank you very much. :D

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Post by Zozue » August 2nd, 2018, 6:21 pm

Hi!

Sorry for the extremely late response! (personal things came up :( ... and I now have a job! :D )
Has it already been 2 months?

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/swanhilde_03_hauff_128kb.mp3 29.08 KB 31min

Please don't hesitate to give me feedback!

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Although I originally claimed section 4, it took me far longer to record just section 3 than I originally anticipated and I'm ok if you'd like to open it up.

It would probably take me another week or 2 to record section 4.

Let me know if you'd like me to record it, although I can't promise I'll do it quickly. It depends on how much you dislike my voice! :)

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Post by Foon » August 3rd, 2018, 1:18 am

Hi Zozue,
No worries! Real life has this tendency to get in between things--congrats on the job! :D
If you'd still like to read section 4, it would be no problem to give you an extension! But if you'd rather focus on other things, no worries. Up to you. :)

I'm on holidays right now, but I hope to PL section 3 in a few days at most. :)
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Post by Kozmique » August 5th, 2018, 2:11 am

Hello! May I please claim section 12?

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