[COMPLETE] Renascence: A Book of Verse by Walter Crane - ke

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 16th, 2017, 8:29 am

Good morning!!
Here are my 2 sections. Please do let me know what the status is.
Thank you,
April

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/renascence_25_crane_128kb.mp3 time 4:17

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/renascence_34_crane_128kb.mp3 time 2:53

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 16th, 2017, 8:41 am

Oops section 34 is not 2:53 time.
It shows only .48 seconds. Hmm....

April

jasonb · Post by **jasonb** » March 16th, 2017, 2:07 pm

Not Larry but Jim section 3. One comment.

5:35 you said "For every joy". Text says "For very joy"

This change doesn't change the meaning or flow of the poem, so it is not necessary, it's up to you. Let me know if you want to leave it as is or fix it.

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 16th, 2017, 2:13 pm

Jason,
I choose to leave it.
Thank you,
April

adr6090 · Post by **adr6090** » March 16th, 2017, 2:17 pm

I am sorry Jason,
I replied and it was not even a comment to a section of mine.

April

Post by **Kitty** » March 16th, 2017, 3:14 pm

and my second contribution for this project

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/renascence_14_crane_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 5:37 min.

Sonia

jasonb · Post by **jasonb** » March 16th, 2017, 3:34 pm

adr6090 wrote:I am sorry Jason,
I replied and it was not even a comment to a section of mine.
April

Haha, you will get your chance! I will be doing more of these soon and hope to get caught up again tomorrow.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » March 16th, 2017, 6:10 pm

Jason, I can't find the note for #3.

jasonb · Post by **jasonb** » March 16th, 2017, 6:14 pm

jasonb wrote:Larry section 3. One comment.

5:35 you said "For every joy". Text says "For very joy"

This change doesn't change the meaning or flow of the poem, so it is not necessary, it's up to you. Let me know if you want to leave it as is or fix it.

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » March 16th, 2017, 6:53 pm

I skipped that note because it is addressed to Larry, not me. And then after that someone seemed to be responding to the choice there whether to change or to leave as is. Now I see that 3 and will change it and send it tomorrow. Sorry, Jim

jasonb · Post by **jasonb** » March 16th, 2017, 8:29 pm

neecheelok70 wrote:I skipped that note because it is addressed to Larry, not me. And then after that someone seemed to be responding to the choice there whether to change or to leave as is. Now I see that 3 and will change it and send it tomorrow. Sorry, Jim

I'm sorry. I got your name mixed up with Larry, Jim. I apologize for that and I will try not to do it again. And also I will find the post from when you submittd the recording and quote it, I was a bit in a hurry today because I wanted to get feedback on these ones that you sent in so long ago.

Just one more long one, and then the rest of the short ones!

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » March 16th, 2017, 8:59 pm

adr6090 wrote:Good morning!!
Here are my 2 sections. Please do let me know what the status is.
Thank you,
April

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/renascence_25_crane_128kb.mp3 time 4:17

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/renascence_34_crane_128kb.mp3 time 2:53

Thanks, April! They are in the MW Ready for PL.

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » March 16th, 2017, 9:00 pm

Kitty wrote:and my second contribution for this project

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/renascence_14_crane_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 5:37 min.

Sonia

Thank you! In the MW Ready for PL

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » March 17th, 2017, 4:11 am

Funny your "not Larry but Jim." I didn't mean to be obnoxious if it seemed so. I was trying to excuse my obtuseness by explaining, I suppose. Thanks, Jason

jasonb · Post by **jasonb** » March 17th, 2017, 10:08 am

Kitty wrote:sorry I didn't wait for a confirmation to my claim here's already one:

https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/renascence_10_crane_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:11 min.

Sonia

Sonia this one is missing the Roman numerals above the stanzas. Larry had mentioned he wanted to include them, but I do see they are only in the instructions for poems with more than 800 words. So this will be a judgment call on your and Larry's part - other than that it is PL ok.