COMPLETE The Poetical Works of Thomas Hood -ck
Thank you all!
Carolin
Lynda, the first few of your short poems are pl ok
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Here is my very cunning fox and hen (deceased) :
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_134_hood_128kb.mp3 (3:53)
Sandra
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_134_hood_128kb.mp3 (3:53)
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PL OK!catharmaiden wrote: ↑March 11th, 2018, 9:09 am Here is my very cunning fox and hen (deceased) :
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_134_hood_128kb.mp3 (3:53)
Sandra
Thanks so much.
~ Larry
Hi Carolin -
Some more ready for PL -
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_153_hood_128kb.mp3 - 3:42
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_164_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:44
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_166_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:32
Lynda
Some more ready for PL -
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_153_hood_128kb.mp3 - 3:42
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_164_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:44
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_166_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:32
Lynda
Thank you all
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here is my Desert-Born:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_139_hood_128kb.mp3 (16:58)
Sandra
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_139_hood_128kb.mp3 (16:58)
Sandra
Thank you sandra
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catharmaiden wrote: ↑March 13th, 2018, 12:31 pm here is my Desert-Born:
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_139_hood_128kb.mp3 (16:58)
Sandra
Thanks for the expressive reading of this piece! PL OK
Did anyone ever tell you that you sound like Sonia?
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yes, my dad on the phonesilverquill wrote: ↑March 16th, 2018, 12:19 pm Thanks for the expressive reading of this piece! PL OK
Did anyone ever tell you that you sound like Sonia?
Sandra
Thank you larry!
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Sorry for the confusion over the PLLmnei wrote: ↑March 11th, 2018, 5:52 pm Hi Carolin -
Some more ready for PL -
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_153_hood_128kb.mp3 - 3:42
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_164_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:44
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_166_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:32
Lynda
I don't always get them done in the exact order when they come in, so I apologize if that caused you stress.
First, let me say how pleased I am with the improvement in your reading! You obviously have been working very hard at this, and it shows. Hood is NOT an easy poet to read. In these he uses dialects, contractions and other contrived poetical devices.
I've let slide the minor mistakes and have marked 153 and 154 PL OK.
There are just two place in 166 that need correction as follows:
Section 166
2:09 Text: “Those very poplar shapes I hate;”
I hear, “Those very popular shapes I hate;”
I feel this is import here because the poet is talking about the shape of the poplar tree, not shapes that are popular.
2:22 Text: “When Peggy's dog her arms empris'n”
I hear “empris’n” with a long “i” which changes both the meaning and the rhyme with the next line “his’n.” Think of “emprison.”
And for Section 144, just one missed edit (this happens to me, too)
3:10 repeat “I shan't not”
~ Larry
Thank you larry!
Carolin
Hi Carolin and Larry -
Here are my updated poems -
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_144_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:03
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_166_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:32
Lynda
Here are my updated poems -
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_144_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:03
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/poeticalworks_166_hood_128kb.mp3 - 4:32
Lynda