[COMPLETE] The Soft Side by Henry James - icequeen

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7A2c3Ml wrote: September 28th, 2022, 1:23 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/softside_12_james_128kb.mp3

"The Soft Side", Henry James, "The Given Case", Section 12
softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
Duration: 31 37


I hit "loudness normalization", and the wavelengths look healthier, so I thought I'd send this along. Any improvement?
It looks like this one is good to go!! It's up to 89db! I'll queue it for PL.
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PL for Section 12
sent by PM.
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Section 19
still has the bump at 25:25 but ....PL OK! Nice edits.
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PL for Section 20: (and sorry if I'm jumping the gun since it isn't in the MW yet)

Nicely done.
20s Title of story missing --> Maud-Evelyn Chapters V – VIII
30:13 delete "said", inserted in “she then observed”. (p305)
( 31:18 “at least” said for “at last” (p306) )
32:50 He’ll still be more faithful” should be “He’ll be still more faithful” (p306)
35:21 “successfully” said for “successively” in “three winters successively” (bottom p307)
Maybe missing one second of silence at the end, to make 5s total?
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Hi, may I please claim sections 17 and 18?
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BookBard wrote: September 30th, 2022, 2:00 pm Hi, may I please claim sections 17 and 18?
Sure thing! Thanks!
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pyledriver wrote: September 25th, 2022, 10:38 am I'll take # 9 The Tree of Knowledge please.
Just getting caught up. This is yours! Thank you!
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Section 20 PL OK!
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PL for Section 4:
Very nice. (And very weird!)

9:35 “smothered” said for “smoothed” in “with which she had smoothed his way”. (page 75)
14:22 – 14:26 Gap with a loud sniff
16:15 “movements” said for “moments” in “There were moments when,” (page 78)
18:08 "III" missing
(20:11 a background ‘click’)
22:12 “but she had by turns felt in it what he had felt and heard in it what he had heard.” Can you put a gap between “what he had felt” and “and heard in it”? Otherwise it’s very confusing to the listener.
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https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/softside_12_james_128kb.mp3

"The Soft Side", Henry James, "The Given Case", Section 12
softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
Duration: 31 17


Finally, here it is, with all fluffs addressed. Hope it works!
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