[COMPLETE] The Soft Side by Henry James - icequeen
I'm happy to DPL from here on.
PL for Section 1:
Nicely read with feeling! And well maintained throughout a LONG section.
1:41 Delete "and” in "There were new books, [and] also in wrappers"
41:38 "world" said for "word" in "but what a cold, flat word it had been!" (p20)
50:56 There's an extra "from" inserted after "comes" in “comes a little from our breathing” p24
51:59 Missing question: ”Aren’t they probably in fact very simple?” before “he presently inquired.” P24
53:19 Dane missing in “Dane completed the figure” p25
Nicely read with feeling! And well maintained throughout a LONG section.
1:41 Delete "and” in "There were new books, [and] also in wrappers"
41:38 "world" said for "word" in "but what a cold, flat word it had been!" (p20)
50:56 There's an extra "from" inserted after "comes" in “comes a little from our breathing” p24
51:59 Missing question: ”Aren’t they probably in fact very simple?” before “he presently inquired.” P24
53:19 Dane missing in “Dane completed the figure” p25
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pyledriver
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I'll take # 9 The Tree of Knowledge please.
PL for Section 19:
((At 86.9, the volume is a little on the low side but within the acceptable range.))
7:27 s cut out of perhaps (top of p282)
21:15 “As they say” said for “As I say” (p288)
26:08 “lie” said for “die” in “When, then, did she die?” (p290)
Less important:
24:03 S after “do” in “but mayn’t he do them some good?”
25:25 "at her unconnected plunge” (p290) is louder and has a 'bump' before and after - perhaps try de-amplifying?
((At 86.9, the volume is a little on the low side but within the acceptable range.))
7:27 s cut out of perhaps (top of p282)
21:15 “As they say” said for “As I say” (p288)
26:08 “lie” said for “die” in “When, then, did she die?” (p290)
Less important:
24:03 S after “do” in “but mayn’t he do them some good?”
25:25 "at her unconnected plunge” (p290) is louder and has a 'bump' before and after - perhaps try de-amplifying?
Ok, all including the optional ones you PMed me should be fixed now!GillH wrote: ↑September 24th, 2022, 11:59 am PL for Section 1:
Nicely read with feeling! And well maintained throughout a LONG section.
1:41 Delete "and” in "There were new books, [and] also in wrappers"
41:38 "world" said for "word" in "but what a cold, flat word it had been!" (p20)
50:56 There's an extra "from" inserted after "comes" in “comes a little from our breathing” p24
51:59 Missing question: ”Aren’t they probably in fact very simple?” before “he presently inquired.” P24
53:19 Dane missing in “Dane completed the figure” p25
Section 1 PL OK!
Nice
edits.
Nice
edits.https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
"The Soft Side", Henry James, "The Given Case", Section 12
softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
Duration: 32 41
OK, I upped it another 6!
"The Soft Side", Henry James, "The Given Case", Section 12
softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
Duration: 32 41
OK, I upped it another 6!
My name is Mark
Technical (only) PL for Section 12:
I'm afraid you're only at 82.6 dB, so you need to amplify it by around 6 dB.
The recording's very 'crackly' with background noise. If you amplify as is, this will get worse. Have you already done any noise cleaning on it?
I'm afraid you're only at 82.6 dB, so you need to amplify it by around 6 dB.
The recording's very 'crackly' with background noise. If you amplify as is, this will get worse. Have you already done any noise cleaning on it?
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docdlmartin
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I don't see any PL notes for section 19 even though the magic window says I should make corrections per the PL notes.
6 posts up from here.docdlmartin wrote: ↑September 27th, 2022, 5:45 pm I don't see any PL notes for section 19 even though the magic window says I should make corrections per the PL notes.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
"The Soft Side", Henry James, "The Given Case", Section 12
softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
Duration: 31 38
Nothing new with volume here, but I did respond to the criticism re background noise. That should be gone now.
"The Soft Side", Henry James, "The Given Case", Section 12
softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
Duration: 31 38
Nothing new with volume here, but I did respond to the criticism re background noise. That should be gone now.
My name is Mark
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
"The Soft Side", Henry James, "The Given Case", Section 12
softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
Duration: 31 37
I hit "loudness normalization", and the wavelengths look healthier, so I thought I'd send this along. Any improvement?
"The Soft Side", Henry James, "The Given Case", Section 12
softside_12_james_128kb.mp3
Duration: 31 37
I hit "loudness normalization", and the wavelengths look healthier, so I thought I'd send this along. Any improvement?
My name is Mark