Rapunzelina wrote: ↑June 25th, 2022, 11:56 am
Sweet Seventeen (from The Girl of the Period, and Other Social Essays)
by Linton, E. Lynn (Elizabeth Lynn), 1822-1898
Ah, I searched for it but didn't see it for some reason Sorry about that. I'll drop it from here. I could offer it to another collection. Would it fit in non-fiction, do you think?
26:54-26:57 - Pause and repeat: "Cruiser" pause "Cruiser"
29:24 - skip in the recording: "and if their com...negligent of duty"
36:47 - long pause: "14 shillings... .. 3 and a half pennies"
37:04-37:10 - pauses in here: "31 pounds, 10 shillings, 6 and a quarter pennies". Listen and see if you want to tighten it up a bit.
42:11 - skip: "to prevent the station...arded"
Thank you. Not sure how those skips happened. I must have somehow done that in editing. Anyway here is the corrected version. Note each correction point is now about 10 seconds earlier because of my tightened up removed bits. Also didn't use a comma in king's in the link because I noticed that you corrected that! Note also that I repeat "cruiser" twice because that is the name of the ship. It's called Cruiser and I am listing each ship as cruiser the category. But I agree about the gap. So I tightened the gap and made one cruiser a bit lower so they were distinct.
lightcrystal wrote: ↑June 25th, 2022, 11:34 pm
Thank you. Not sure how those skips happened. I must have somehow done that in editing. Anyway here is the corrected version. Note each correction point is now about 10 seconds earlier because of my tightened up removed bits. Also didn't use a comma in king's in the link because I noticed that you corrected that! Note also that I repeat "cruiser" twice because that is the name of the ship. It's called Cruiser and I am listing each ship as cruiser the category. But I agree about the gap. So I tightened the gap and made one cruiser a bit lower so they were distinct.
I'm working on section 17 of book 3 of volume one, the secret doctrine, by Helena Blavatsky. It's the final section of the book and of the volume. (We're doing book 2 collaboratively now, readers wanted!)