[COMPLETE] Echoes of the forest by William Edgar Brown - tg

[czandra]

section 5 corrected, but the edits are audible because I'm recording in a different place.

Czandra

[czandra]

Adrain, 18 has a few optional edits:

3:49 should be Loud and louder not louder and louder
5:41 he'd not he'll
8:50 I knew, not I know
9:15 as soon as...

Sorry, times are approximate. I haven't got precision on that yet...

Czandra

[adrianstephens]

Adrain, 18 has a few optional edits:

3:49 should be Loud and louder not louder and louder
5:41 he'd not he'll
8:50 I knew, not I know
9:15 as soon as...

Sorry, times are approximate. I haven't got precision on that yet...

Czandra

Thank you Czandra.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/echoesforest_18_brown_128kb.mp3

3:47 3:49 should be Loud and louder not louder and louder
5:40 5:41 he'd not he'll
8:48 8:50 I knew, not I know
9:14 9:15 as soon as...

"Sorry, times are approximate. I haven't got precision on that yet...". I hope you'll forgive some gratuitous advice. And my apologies if you already know this.
I PL in Audacity. That way I can easily stop and locate the problem.
I also drop labels (ctrl+B) at points of interest and Edit / Labels / Edit Labels conveniently lists the position of these labels.
I do the same when editing in corrections so that I can always go back to the location of the edit, should I need to.

Regards,
Adrian

[adrianstephens]

Thank you Adrian. I've marked s. 17 PLokay. Nicely read indeed. If you wanted to, you could add after the words "Oneida Legend" at the beginning, the words of the footnote on that page, acknowledging the source. Not required, though. Let me know if you do make the change.

Czandra

Hello Czandra,
I've expanded the intro and title.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/echoesforest_17_brown_128kb.mp3

Regards,
Adrian

[adrianstephens]

Section 5 - PL Notes

at 9:04 "boundless band" should be "countless band"

at 10:31 "in many a form" should be "in full many a form"

at 13:09 "was thus busied" s/b "thus was busied"

at 13:22 "nets she made" s/b "nets made she"

at 13:34 "each day their task was ended"  - edit gone wrong, missing phrase "seemed a day ... each day" after "each day".

Hello Czandra. I'm going to call this PL OK.
You did miss the edit at 13:09, but I think we can argue that this doesn't change the meaning.

Regards,
Adrian

[czandra]

excellent, Adrian. Did you correct section 14?

Czandra

[adrianstephens]

excellent, Adrian. Did you correct section 14?

Czandra

Yes, I did. May 16th.

[alanmapstone]

Section 23

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/echoesforest_23_brown_128kb.mp3
2.39

[czandra]

thanks, Alan. Early bird! EDIT: Right, that's not Oxford, Nova Scotia!

Cz

[czandra]

Good morning Alan. Pronunciation of Ontanagon should be changed to Onta-nagon with accent on the O and on the a in nagon, making it metred /- /-. Both a's are soft, as you have done. Fortunately it only appears once, so not a hard fix.

Thanks!
Cz

[vincentl]

I can read the following :

28 - Reviews 1
29 - Reviews 2

Please and Thanks.

-- Vinny Lerin

[alanmapstone]

Section 23 revised

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/echoesforest_23_brown_128kb.mp3
2.39

I am in the original Oxenford

[czandra]

Thank you Vinny and Alan!

[alanmapstone]

Section 22

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/echoesforest_22_brown_128kb.mp3
5.17

[czandra]

Thank you Alan. That's a lovely poem, isn't it? Answers some significant questions! PLokay

Cz